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    Tralyn Posts: 230, Reputation: 17
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    Aug 9, 2008, 08:10 PM
    You Can Say I'm Ticklish
    How the true spirit of jubilance
    Can flash by
    In an instant
    Or stay with us
    As if a smile
    Was tattooed across our hearts
    How fast the days do pass us
    When our grief
    Can lie in shadows
    And we do not procrastinate
    In leaving our ill woes
    Behind

    Still -
    That stone adult expression -
    It often made me wonder
    If happiness
    Was not left for children
    As innocence is to a babe

    I have had that
    Light and Joyous feeling
    That swims
    Beneath the skin,
    Tickling you
    Straight through your soul
    Until you race inside
    Like the wings of a hummingbird
    Flying

    Then
    It doesn't matter if it's raining
    Because you feel
    Like the sun
    Is beaming
    And that around you
    God is smiling
    So you too
    are smiling back

    Inside
    You drift to places
    Like a beach
    Next to an ocean
    Or a field
    That's filled with flowers
    Or within
    A lover's arms

    Do not
    Misunderstand me
    I cannot deny
    That sadness
    Has enveloped me
    Causing
    All my tears
    To fall

    That when I was a child
    I felt pain
    And I shared
    Laughter
    There were lessons
    That were planted
    That I learn more
    As I grow

    That my being
    Is like
    A funny bone
    That can't be seen
    By the naked eye
    That it has it's soft spots
    That make me laugh
    And that make me
    Cry

    That there are those
    That know
    I'm ticklish
    But are not sure
    Of just quite where

    And there are those
    That I know
    Love Me
    Who can pull
    Strings of my heart
    Can trip and fall down
    Holding tight
    Onto my
    Hand

    And them,
    They always shine
    Because they can tickle
    My heart
    And set
    Those hummingbirds
    To flight
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    #2

    Aug 12, 2008, 12:24 AM
    Tralyn, I am just this evening beginning to see your posts. I feel I have missed a lot by not coming across your posts earlier. You touch something deep inside my spirit, like kindred souls meant to collide with such a clarity of purpose as to share a mirror image of oneself. It is late and perhaps tomorrow I will wonder why I felt this familiarity to a person I have never met nor read before but for now, I thank you for your gift of imagery through your words. Of the posts I have read this evening, I feel you know me already and I, you. Perhaps not but your writings are quite refreshing and I thank you for sharing!
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    Aug 12, 2008, 12:34 AM
    I think that certain spirits can sense the goodness in one another and there - a common bond, a connection is formed. I got chills as I read your post. I peeked at your website - absolutely beautiful work - from deep inside it flows. Thank you for your post - I truly appreciate it. I am rather new here, I hope we cross paths again soon
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    Aug 12, 2008, 12:39 AM
    Tralyn, I appreciate your kind words regarding my art work.

    I am sure our paths will cross again. We seem to be drawn to similar posts but if not, I am richer for having read your poem. Thank you for sharing.

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