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    Jun 7, 2010, 07:05 PM
    My First Poem
    To My Joey

    On April 7th these words were said do I take this woman to be my wife
    I said yes for the rest of my life
    There was a time when our love was lost awhile
    You gave me a daughter I gave you a smile
    Some years went by and now our family totals to five
    We can see and feel our love thrive
    Our marriage has not always been the best
    But I like to think it's a love nest
    The past years were difficult and have not been good
    But the next hundred years will be better as they should
    With all the love I have for you
    A good life I must, I have too
    I have not forget our little three
    Before they leave I hope better things they will see
    Patience understanding and love I need
    To make all my dreams succeed
    My love for you is honest and true
    Is it the same with you too
    Joey my love and Joey my wife
    For all our years you were and are my life
    In a hundred years when we depart
    In heaven another love we will start
    My love for you is plain to see
    You're my love happy anniversary
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    Jun 7, 2010, 08:08 PM
    Another good one, troublemakerman!

    I had mentioned to you on one of your other threads about whether you wrote lyrics or had considered having something that you've written set to music.

    Setting words to music is something that I do. I'm offering to help you to do that, if you're interested?

    You're real good with rhyming and content, so maybe you might want to see what something that's short that you write might sound if set to music?

    The offer is there. I've already helped people with song writing a number of times on this site. In a couple of the threads, the original posters could actually hear the music that was written!

    Thanks!
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    Jun 8, 2010, 04:29 AM

    Maybe, and maybe you should read all my poems to my wife first then let me know. And if no one gets mad that I will post about 7 more poems.
    Thank You
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    Jun 8, 2010, 06:49 AM
    My second Poem
    To My Joey and Children

    I have made many mistakes in my life
    Except the day I took a wife
    From that came the pitter patter of six little feet
    That truly made my life complete
    The days I hate are your birthdays I believe
    Because you get older and so you will leave
    I wish time would stop on Christmas day
    So you would stay small to play and play
    Before the day comes when you say goodbye
    I hope that everything you want I could buy
    As far as things for my wife
    No hurry we have all of our life
    The one thing I have plenty of
    Is my wife and children I truly love
    Love is the only thing I want from you
    Forever and ever you will love me true
    As a husband and father Im not the best
    But how do I compare to all the rest
    If anything should ever break us up
    I think I would shatter like a cup
    You all have a piece of my heart
    Please, please do not tear it apart
    I do not know what else to say
    Except god protect my family everyday
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    Jun 8, 2010, 06:50 AM
    My third Poem
    To My Wife

    When I was young at age seventeen
    I met my future wife who was nearly sixteen
    When I was age twenty one wild and free
    I ask my love if she would marry me
    Not thinking how fast time passes by
    We got older and older my wife and I
    Thinking back I did not know
    How much my love for my wife would grow
    On January fifth two thousand and nine
    I lost my wife I thought would always be mine
    You find out how time flies
    When someone you love dies
    We were together fifty plus years
    Now my eyes are filled with tears
    In a poem written by my wife
    Something she had written early in life
    She wrote, in her dreams our lips have met
    You wait honey I will hook you yet
    When I sit and look at pictures of my wife
    How pretty she was and how short was her life
    It is over a year that my wife is gone
    People say I must move on
    My children are all now grown
    They have children of their own
    I loved my wife so very much
    And now I will no longer feel her touch
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    Jun 8, 2010, 06:51 AM
    My Forth Poem
    Joey


    For so many years she was my wife
    Now she is just a memory in my life
    Everyday that goes by
    I find it hard to keep a dry eye
    I was born to love my kids and my wife
    Which I will for the rest of my life
    I realize some of my poems are sad
    That's how it is losing someone you love so bad
    All I have now are my memories of joy
    Dreaming back to the days of my wife my daughters and my boy
    Everyday is about the same for me
    I eat I sulk I sit and watch TV
    I have my first tattoo on my arm honoring my wife
    With all the years she was in my life
    I wear her name as proud as can be
    Wishing she was still hear with me
    My wife was my children's mother
    There will never be another
    My love for my wife was my first my only and my past
    As far as Im concerned she will be my last
    I remember back to that first night when I drank some wine
    Once we kissed I felt in my heart she would be mine
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    Jun 8, 2010, 06:52 AM
    My Fifth Poem
    Joey

    I loved my wife and I still do with all my heart
    Now that she is gone in my chest is missing a big part

    My wife would get upset with me because at her I would stare
    I would say to her because I love you and that shows how I care

    Over the years she was my wife, my friend and my lover
    It is so hard now and I will never love for another

    When I lost my wife I lost so much
    No more kisses no more holding hands no more will we touch

    My wife is up in heaven above
    I hope she can still feel all my love

    When I see people kissing on TV
    I see them as my wife and me

    Without my wife my heart aches and I feel it burn
    I kiss her pictures her poem and also her urn

    In the urn are her ashes and also space for me
    When I pass together again we will be

    Everything I did was for my wife
    She was one of the best things in my life

    We had a place we liked to go to eat
    Now when I go I only need one seat
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    Jun 8, 2010, 06:54 AM
    My Sixth Poem
    Joey

    JoAnn was the birth name of my wife
    To me Joey was her name for a lot of our married life

    One of the best things anyone could ask for in life
    Is to have a good and loving wife

    When it comes time for me to pass no matter day or night
    I hope and pray that my wife will be my guiding light

    I did not complement my wife as much as I could have
    But with all my heart I gave her my love

    My wife is in heaven watching over our family
    Hoping we could be the best we could be

    I am now living by myself and on my own
    I have my dogs and my family but I feel alone

    I never thought I knew how bad pain could ever be
    Until my wife died and left me

    At times my wife lets me know she is near
    She turns off the picture frame to let me know she is here

    On a chain around my neck I wear my wife’s wedding band
    I also still wear mine on the finger of my left hand

    To anyone who reads this poem
    Do not let the time with your family go
    Everything is gone before you know
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    Jun 8, 2010, 06:57 AM
    My Seventh Poem
    I wish I had the power to turn back time
    I would go back to the day when my wife became mine
    If I could have a wish, just one
    I would back in time when I was married my age was
    Twenty-one
    If I had the chance to relive my life
    I would do it again with my same wife
    In a pocket next to my heart are pictures of my wife
    I will probably carry them for the rest of my life
    My girl and I were young when me first met in life
    She grew up to be a woman and became my wife
    On that day we married she had a sparkle in her eye
    No one could be happier than I
    We were standing there and she looked so pretty
    I felt as if I won first prize in a lottery
    I have become more sensitive in these last years
    A movie a song even a thought can bring on tears
    I miss that weakness and love that was in my wife
    Now it’s my weakness trying to go on with my life
    On that last day I had no time to tell her I love her, or to
    Say good bye
    I do find a lot of time for me to cry
    When your married a long time you don’t realize the
    Little you know in your life
    I found out how much when I lost my wife
    On mother’s day my wife’s dog had died
    She was a family member and I cried
    My wife is my past, my children my present I lost my
    Future when I lost my wife
    Not a day goes by that I don’t miss her in my life
    I feel that I'm honoring my wife
    Writing poems about some of her life


    COMMENTS WELCOME: Thank You

    And yes I realized I gooft on # FOURTH.

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