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    sunnyjo13 Posts: 5, Reputation: 1
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    #1

    May 5, 2008, 08:22 PM
    Can u read this and give me an honest opinion
    Can u please do me a favor?
    Can you tell me what you think about this poem?


    To All You People
    To all you people you think I知 obsessed
    Im not, not for awhile now.
    To all you people who think I知 in love
    I was, but finally realized the truth.
    To all you people who thought I hated his girlfriend
    You were wrong, I could never hate her.
    To all you people who think I still have feelings for him
    Not no more, I finally let them go.
    To all you people who think I知 giving up
    Your right, and that I don稚 need to explain.
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    cleanfun Posts: 26, Reputation: 10
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    May 5, 2008, 08:31 PM
    Honestly, it sounds like you're lying to yourself.

    You are obsessed
    You are in love
    You do hate his girlfriend
    You do still have feelings for him
    You are trying to let go but just can't quite do it yet.

    However, I think you were telling the truth on the last part; You are giving up.

    And you might be a man.

    I'm not trying to be overly critical but I figured you would appreciate some honest feedback.
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    godsbabygirl267 Posts: 175, Reputation: 11
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    May 5, 2008, 08:34 PM
    To tell you the truth, I think you are trying what I do when I can't actually get over someone, I can''t, so I pretend to by saying I am to myself, in my poetry, in my emails, in my diary, to other people, to the person worth getting over. You are in,, Love? No not love more like 'lust' but it was a good poem at that! Still in denial though>
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    Dec 2, 2009, 07:50 PM

    It's very good, well thought out.
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