Ask Experts Questions for FREE Help !
Ask
    dommx430's Avatar
    dommx430 Posts: 1, Reputation: 1
    New Member
    		  
    #1

    Jan 29, 2007, 05:17 AM
    Lyrics I wrote
    Heyy people I'm dom from australia... I'm in a rap group aussie rap with me and a few other mates.. but the james a main member is currently in hospital after being stabbed 3 times and my other mate is locked up for at least 8 years for murder and my other mate has just got out of lock up.. like should I continue rapping or what.. here's a few bars of my rap's let me no what you think I just post some I don't want all of it on here just in case copyright..



    I sit back reminiscing about all the good times I’ve been missing…
    Is all this struggle and trouble worth the money.. life isn't fair
    Some will spend a mill’ on there wheels… while some don’t have a meal
    Overseas killings are regular…
    Could my lack of behavior be caused by this worlds unfairness…
    What a mess..

    Wake up thinking is all this struggle worth the money and trouble


    How much changes thinking about junior school… when you didn’t have to be cool….
    And today you get locked up for being in a fight… but overseas… there killing all night
    Thanks heaps dom
    RubyPitbull's Avatar
    RubyPitbull Posts: 3,575, Reputation: 648
    Ultra Member
    		  
    #2

    Jan 29, 2007, 07:34 AM
    Sounds like a cohesive and thought provoking rap to me. I like it.

    Should you continue? Only you can answer that question. Do you have the fire in your belly to keep at it for years knowing that you might not ever hit it big but want to follow your dream anyway? Your answer to this should guide you.
    RubyPitbull's Avatar
    RubyPitbull Posts: 3,575, Reputation: 648
    Ultra Member
    		  
    #3

    Jan 29, 2007, 07:39 PM
    I am transferring what you wrote to me privately into the posting as I told you I would.

    Quote Originally Posted by dommx430
    thanks man... yeah well like i dont want too put everything into it becasue if i fail wat else can i do.. BUT i think i will becasue since ive started ive got alot better and i guess i can only get better ay.. thanks heaps man peace


    And to repeat what I said to you privately, you are quite welcome. Stay cool.
Not your question? Ask your question View similar questions
 

Question Tools Search this Question
Search this Question:

Advanced Search

Add your answer here.


Check out some similar questions!

Lyrics, please [ 1 Answers ]

Could someone please give me the lyrics to an old love song, "Where Walks My True Love?" I think the first couple of lines are "Where walks my true love? There you will find me. Though we be dreams apart, or just a smile away." Could you also refer me to a website where I can be sure to listen...

Use of lyrics [ 2 Answers ]

Sam Cooke's song "Nearer to Thee" is a version of a traditional hymn Nearer, My God, to Thee by Sarah Adams, 1841 which is free domain. However, when comparing the two songs, the only similarity is the chorus hook line "Nearer My God to Thee". I would like to use Sam Cooke's version in my book,...

I wrote a book! Now what do I do? [ 4 Answers ]

I have wrote a book about a *********** career and do not know what to do next. I don't want to let the cat out of the bag yet, by stating********** as its name! The book might have some possible criminal content included! Is there a way to get it published without being jailed for true...

Who wrote it and where is it? [ 2 Answers ]

It was one of the first romance novels I ever read. The name of the book was " Dark Water". Its about a young native american woman called Darkwater who has lost her beloved husband and finds love once again to a mountain man. On the cover of the book is the most beautifull woman I have ever...

Need help with lyrics [ 2 Answers ]

Please help me... I'm looking for an old 80's song I have but don't know the title of it... It sounds clubish in nature and it goes like this: “You can feel two hearts in me You can hear the voices in me I am the thief of lusted source Gets me higher when I'm blue Takes my hand and runs me...

View more questions Search