[alli1234]

Correct punctuation needed --

Simba the puppy was an adventurous little guy; he was on a journey to find the golden bone this bone was said to give anyone who possessed it with instant superpowers Simba wanted to find it first because he did not want the evil kitten chuckles to have superpowers, which would give him the ability to have power over the whole town; he did not want to be a slave to the tyrant chuckles the crazy kitten, first Simba went to the woods because he was told that the bone was hidden in the bat caves; he faced many obstacles but he succeeded ; he found the magical bone that gave him superpowers which helped him fight crime from villain like chuckles the kitten the town was saved from the wrath of chuckles.

[Wondergirl]

Is this your work, or have you even tried yet?

[teacherjenn4]

Is this your work, or have you even tried yet?

I agree. This needs major work!