[Wondergirl]

What do you think about how I began the poem?

[mariapaula]

Sorry I took so long to answere my internet is horrible you can take any words from the article

[mariapaula]

Perhaps you can make the poem about nature

[mariapaula]

Or it would be easier to do it like the movie just not copying it

[mariapaula]

It can't have many extra words it has to be with words from that article, the extra words have to be like, the, an, at, because you know that kind of words

[Wondergirl]

Or it would be easier to do it like the movie just not copying it

I think that would be very hard to do.

[Wondergirl]

You're going to need more than a, an, the, etc.

[mariapaula]

Well...

[Wondergirl]

Curly was one of the Stooges (the third one)
And lived in a massive cabin in the woods.
He spent summer weekends in markets
And spent lots of money on foods.

Is that better?

[Wondergirl]

At least write down the basic idea and verses (stanzas), then chew around on them.

[mariapaula]

What I mean is like one word between two from the article for example like 75 percent from the article and 25 percent extra words

[mariapaula]

I love that stanza

[mariapaula]

Yes I like your idea

[mariapaula]

Let me show you mine

North in the woods,
We love the cabin,
In the early morning,
We spend our weekends with birds,
Trees and nature.

The performance of colors,
Sounds and domestic smells,
That make it similar,
To a beautiful orchestra.

The summer markets in America are opened,
To show the products of nature,
And like the orchestra,
They show a massive aroma.

The love for worldwide aromas,
Is understood,
And globally we must take care of nature,
So that we may leave our children,
In a better world.

[Wondergirl]

I had to eat supper before I fainted from hunger. Isn't it time for bed for you?

Do you see how I did the first stanza? We could probably move things around more, but leave it for now for stanza 2.

[mariapaula]

I have to many extra words and I use to little words of the word list

[Wondergirl]

let me show you mine

North in the woods,
we love the cabin,
in the early morning,
we spend our weekends with birds,
trees and nature.

The performance of colors,
sounds and domestic smells,
that make it similar,
to a beautiful orchestra.

The summer markets in America are opened,
to show the products of nature,
and like the orchestra,
they show a massive aroma.

The love for worldwide aromas,
is understood,
and globally we must take care of nature,
so that we may leave our children,
in a better world.

And now you can plug in more words from the list.

[mariapaula]

Could you help me in that?

[Wondergirl]

And don't forget -- parallel structure or refrain, alliteration and repetition

I don't get this --to me verses and stanzas are the same. "3-5 stanzas, 18-20 verses" Do you mean lines (not stanzas)?

[mariapaula]

3-5 stanzas 18-20 lines