[Serulian]

Maybe, Probably
“After our talk, after your crying, I asked you if you were okay.
You paused and told me, 'Maybe… Probably'.”


I know you're hurting
Your mind needs some sorting
You tell me everything's fine
“Don't worry”, you say
But I understand you need time

Because these things take time…
Because these things take time…

Your world was looking bleak,
I hope I can be the help you seek
The thoughts I'm sure you conceal
God, I only imagine how you could feel…

I want to take your hand,
Help you see that
Yes, you can
I believe in you,
In everything you do

The breaks that made you so fragile,
Is your source of motivation,
To be more agile and
Pick yourself up quick,
I'll hold you tight,
I won't let you slip

I want to help you feel better
Damn, it can be so much better


It can be so much better

[Wondergirl]

You must have c/p-ed from Word because weird characters have replaced apostrophes, etc. Please edit it or repost it, as it's very difficult to read this way. Thanks.

[shivalik]

You have a poetic talent that has just come out in a real conversational style.
This is a good poem.

If you can edit further "It can be so much better".


I invite you to read my poems:
http://www.wikinut.com/butterflies-that-flutter-by/1n8c2r-_/1pq8-gts/
http://www.wikinut.com/the-afterthought/1l-hi8y7/171bnn8u/
http://www.wikinut.com/to-a-tree/_tju0ywp/139tmm0i/
http://www.wikinut.com/best-wishes/104hnpon/r2pcnx03/