[liffey]

Am 17 and I've been singing since I was 3. I really love to sing but I am not good at writing songs. I want to write a song about a dream I want to make true. I want to become a singer and many people don't believe in me, and I want to try to reach it even if I am alone.
Something about that... (my thoughts are similar to the song The climb by Miley Cyrus... )
Can anyone help me?
I want to succeed in singing so much... because I think that's the only thing I am really good at.

[Strength89]

The best singers are those who sing from the heart. The best way to sing from the heart is to sing about things you have experienced and the best way to do that is to write your own songs.

Start easy and write poems and slowly turn those poems in song lyrics.

For example, if a guy broke your heart and you were sad for weeks but one day, you woke up and realized that he isn't worth it... you can write something like...

And you, you broke my heart
You took away from me, what I thought was the best part of me,
You took yourself away and now,
Now, I'm feeling all kinds of blue

It seems as if the days drag on and on
And it seems as if I'll never go on
But you'll see, you'll see me shine on

Because I realized, that you aren't who you said you are
And I realized that you, you'll never be what you say you are
And I, I realized that you, you'll never be the best for me

Etc...

Good luck!

[liffey]

Hey Strength89, thank you so much for help! I'll try to write something down. :D

[Clough]

Hi, liffey!

What kind of lyrics have you already written, please?

Thanks!

[liffey]

Don't leave me just silence
I'm not good with it
I'm trying to fed it with meaning
I'm trying to give it a soul

Breathe, just please don't be quiet
Do it in a million different ways
I will notice the difference
Say at least a word
Just don't depose eyes of me


Don't leave me just silence
Because then I'm trying to find what I want
And I find what I never wanted to
Silence is certainly not my friend

Breathe, just please don't be quiet
Do it in a million different ways
I will notice the difference
Say at least a word
Just don't depose eyes of me

Don't leave me the silence
I'm begging you
It's a huge space that wants to be full
With tears, with nightmares...
Don't do this to me in a moment of fragility
Don't do this to me when I need to feel that everything will be fine...


But that is really not good :( Could you try to repair my mistakes of something..

[liffey]

OR* something (sry)

[Clough]

When I'm on again, I'll take a look at it and make some recommendations to you.

It's not easy right now for me to be on here...

If you do a search for Clough with the words Write Song, you'll find how I've helped others with this same type of thing.

Thanks!

[Clough]

Hmmm...

Must be sure to remember about this one too!