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    Jul 13, 2010, 06:09 AM
    Could someone please read my song lyrics and possibly revise it or help me add music?
    I recently wrote a song for my boyfriend, mainly about missing him during the summer, I'd like to know if someone could take some time to edit it, change parts, add music, anything like that. The song goes like this :

    Every second that I spend, Wishing you were by my side,
    Hold me tight up in your arms, where I can stay and know I'm safe,
    Cause when your not here, nothing feels right

    The time we spent together, safe in memory,
    You bring my heart to life, ill make every second count
    Cause when we're not together, I miss you more than ever.

    Underneath the stars so bright, wishing you were here,
    The empty spot taunting, Just wish you were beside,
    Feeling dead without you, why can't you just appear?

    The time we spent together, safe in memory,
    You bring my heart to life, ill make every second count
    Cause when we're not together, I miss you more than ever

    When I'm not with you, even for the shortest time,
    I can't help myself but to wish you were by my side,
    Holding my hand, keeping me close, never letting go.

    The time we spent together, safe in memory,
    You bring my heart to life, ill make every second count
    Cause when we're not together, I miss you more than ever.

    Since were not together, ill be sure to keep you here,
    I'll keep you in my memories till’ you're here again,
    I’ll keep you in my spirit, in my mind and in my heart.

    The time we spent together, safe in memory,
    You bring my heart to life, ill make every second count
    Cause when we're not together, I miss you more than ever
    (more than ever)
    (... I miss you)

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