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    Oct 22, 2009, 12:33 PM
    Thesis statement
    Comparison and contrast essay

    Because nursing may involve more education and may include extensive internships which requires commitment, I chose Social Science because its more hands on and does not require as many years of education.
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    Jan 30, 2010, 05:03 AM

    First, your thesis is unclear and too wordy. Also, there are a few grammatical errors that need to be addressed (i.e. "its" should read "it's."
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    Jan 30, 2010, 10:10 AM
    Old thread. Please check the date of the original question before posting.

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