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    Jun 6, 2009, 07:25 PM
    Try solving this paragraph!
    Ironclad here people, got something good for u guys to work on, takes some good skills!

    How quickly can you find out what is unusual about this paragraph? It looks so ordinary that you would think nothing was wrong with it at all, and in fact nothing is wrong with it. But it is unusual. Why? If u study it, and think about it, you may find out, but I will not assist you in any way. You must do this without coaching. No doubt, if you work on it for half an hour it will dawn on you... who knows?? Now try your brain skills on this!
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    Jun 6, 2009, 07:28 PM

    No letter "e" in it.
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    Jun 6, 2009, 07:38 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by ironclad04 View Post
    Ironclad here people, got something good for u guys to work on, takes some good skills!

    How quickly can you find out what is unusual about this paragraph? It looks so ordinary that you would think nothing was wrong with it at all, and in fact nothing is wrong with it. But it is unusual. Why? If u study it, and think about it, you may find out, but i will not assist you in any way. You must do this without coaching. No doubt, if you work on it for half an hour it will dawn on you.... who knows??? Now try your brain skills on this!
    The red show some errors.

    I also believe there is a comma splice in your paragraph.

    Sarah
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    Jun 6, 2009, 07:39 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    No letter "e" in it.
    Wow! Pretty good smarty pants! Lol
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    Jun 6, 2009, 07:40 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by mudweiser View Post
    The red show some errors.

    I also believe there is a comma splice in your paragraph.

    Sarah
    I know, my bad!?
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    Jun 6, 2009, 07:44 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by mudweiser View Post
    I also believe there is a comma splice in your paragraph.
    No comma splice. And he needs a few more commas here and there.
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    Jun 7, 2009, 01:21 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    No letter "e" in it.
    I thought it was when he used a "u" to say "you", I would have never gotten that there were no e's in it! Great job!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 07:29 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by startover22 View Post
    I thought it was when he used a "u" to say "you", I would have never gotten that there were no e's in it! Great job!
    Thanks guys! Its just an open humor type thing I did in school long time ago, I almost took poetry too! But thanks for the feedback!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 07:34 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by ironclad04 View Post
    Thanks guys!! its just an open humor type thing i did in school long time ago, I almost took poetry too! but thanks for the feedback!!
    Next time, copy the thing correctly, so you don't lead anyone down a blind alley.
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    Jun 7, 2009, 07:51 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    Next time, copy the thing correctly, so you don't lead anyone down a blind alley.
    Do u have something better than ironclad?? Lol thanks for the feedback though!
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