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    #21

    Apr 17, 2009, 11:38 PM

    It would be okay and preferable to post it here, on the thread.

    Nothing to be embarrassed about! Not all of my websites are complete... You should and also can have a number of websites that won't cost you anything.

    Thanks!
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    #22

    Apr 17, 2009, 11:41 PM

    Okay, I've seen your website. Let's work on the hoobly ad. You can put a link to your website on hoobly.
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    Apr 17, 2009, 11:46 PM

    Ok. :-) Im on hoobly right now... I actually was looking for cleaning services and did not see anything... some direction would be helpful hehe.. What did you think of the site? Once the pictures and other things are put in.. I know its static but do you think it looks professional enough to catch the typical wandering patron or customer?
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    Apr 17, 2009, 11:47 PM
    I found post an ad.. What do reccoment for the headline... I typical put my business name and residential and commercial cleaning
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    Apr 17, 2009, 11:53 PM

    I'm working on your ad right now.

    Thanks!
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    Apr 17, 2009, 11:59 PM

    Okok sorry for interruption
    But I would like to sayThank you for taking the time though with this ad.. I really do appreciate all your help
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    Apr 18, 2009, 12:00 AM
    Chicago, IL Cleaning Service

    We offer general cleaning of offices and homes. Bathrooms, kitchens, bedrooms, living rooms, furniture, etc. Carpet and hard floor surface cleaning. Floor stripping, buffing and waxing. Window cleaning.

    Serving the areas of Cook County and beyond.

    Prompt, neat and dependable. Reasonable rates and free estimates.

    Please contact (Your contact information.)

    For more information, please visit our website at (URL of website.)

    Keywords: Chicago cleaning contractor, Chicago maid service, Chicago carpet cleaning, Illinois commercial and residential maid services, cleaning services in Illinois, Illinois janitorial service

    (I would then list the names of every city that you are willing to serve and how you will serve. Such as, Joliet IL cleaning service, Downer's Grove IL carpet cleaning, etc.) Please get creative and list a whole bunch of things that you can and will do.

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    #28

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:01 AM
    Quote Originally Posted by Cleaningman23 View Post
    okok sorry for interruption
    But I would like to sayThank you for taking the time though with this ad.. I really do appreciate all your help
    No problem! I'm here to help! :)

    Please let me know when you've posted the hoobly ad.

    Thanks!
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    #29

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:04 AM
    What should I do for my headline... my business name?
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    Apr 18, 2009, 12:09 AM

    People aren't going to be looking for you by your business name but by what you do.

    Chicago, IL Cleaning Service should work just fine for a title for this test. We're trying to beat your competition here, and your business name isn't the way to do that. How you word the ads is the way to do that.

    Thanks!
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    #31

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:10 AM
    One more thing lol but I can't find cleaning services under the sub categories.. should I do something else

    Thanks
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    #32

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:10 AM
    Please study how I've worded various ads by clicking HERE.

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    #33

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:11 AM
    Quote Originally Posted by Cleaningman23 View Post
    one more thing lol but i can't find cleaning services under the sub categories..should i do something else

    Thanks
    Let me logon to hoobly and check it out.
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    #34

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:14 AM
    Quote Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    Please study how I've worded various ads by clicking HERE.

    Thanks!


    Oh OK I understand where you are coming from now!

    Thanks for the input!

    Much Appreciated!
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    #35

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:15 AM

    Home & Garden then Housekeeping would be one category.
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    Apr 18, 2009, 12:20 AM
    Business & Industrial, Construction might be another area.

    I agree that it's hard to find a cleaning category on there. They've changed the site since I first joined.
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    #37

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:20 AM

    Here is the ad I hope it looks all right... did I do everything correctly?
    If not I can edit it... much appreciated!
    Thank You
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    #38

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:20 AM
    http://www.hoobly.com/0/0/833705.html
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    #39

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:21 AM

    Where is the link to the ad, please?

    Thanks!
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    #40

    Apr 18, 2009, 12:21 AM
    Oops! I now see that you posted it! We crossed paths at the same time!

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