[sean0101]

Hi,
I am applying to scholarship within department and college. I am majoring in finance. They asked for an essay along with application to scholarship. I have to include my goals and aspirations and the essay should be around 150 words. I really dnk what to include in there. All I know that after getting my undergraduate degree, I want to apply to MBA at Harvard Business School. Do I have to include that too?

Thanks

[Wondergirl]

Now it's time to get creative. One hundred fifty words is nothing, but make them memorable and shine more brightly than other essays.

Start with a zinger of a first sentence--"Who would've thought that that bratty little boy in kindergarten would someday ................" or "I never understood until recently why I always liked that Bible story about the widow and her jug of oil."

[sean0101]

Now it's time to get creative. One hundred fifty words is nothing, but make them memorable and shine more brightly than other essays.

Start out with a zinger of a first sentence--"Who would've thought that that bratty little boy in kindergarten would someday ................" or "I never understood until recently why I always liked that Bible story about the widow and her jug of oil."

Actually, I never thought that I am going to be in US (I am from Russia) and study at one of the best universities. Yeah, I will think about starting like that.

Thanks, appreciate.

[sean0101]

Now it's time to get creative. One hundred fifty words is nothing, but make them memorable and shine more brightly than other essays.

Start out with a zinger of a first sentence--"Who would've thought that that bratty little boy in kindergarten would someday ................" or "I never understood until recently why I always liked that Bible story about the widow and her jug of oil."

Can I start include attending graduate school as a goal too? (MBA)

[Wondergirl]

Of course, but you have only 150 words to play around with, so keep it sharp and tight.