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meandlisa · Feb 21, 2008, 02:38 PM

Love the comment

meandlisa · Feb 21, 2008, 02:40 PM

Would read this book! Please finish it.

kraz · Feb 22, 2008, 08:19 PM

Born from fire, two shape shifting friends?

How about Fire Wolves?

I'll keep thinking or more.

mysteryperson123 · Feb 23, 2008, 08:28 AM

I will finish it meandlisa. I will probably write down all the stuff about their personalities and all that.
Born from fire? I definitely do not remember putting that in.

mysteryperson123 · Feb 23, 2008, 08:29 AM

If anyone read those pieces of work and would like me to post in more then just say and I will.

mysteryperson123 · Feb 23, 2008, 09:30 AM

Here is the rest of my story, hope you like it, there are a few faults but I can sort them later.
Alass and Jaw Dan are both almost completely fictional.

mysteryperson123 · Feb 24, 2008, 07:06 AM

What's with the aa?

kraz · Feb 26, 2008, 10:43 PM

Born of fire is maybe title, you said the girl Dandy's house was set on fire and when she wakes up she is surrounded by rodents and has turned into a wolf.

mysteryperson123 · Feb 29, 2008, 02:20 AM

You are right, that is a good title.

mysteryperson123 · Mar 10, 2008, 08:59 AM

Anyone who reads that please comment and if you have any ideas on a title please share them with me.:) :) :D

GODOGOOD · Mar 11, 2008, 11:31 PM

If you can't make a name, change your thoughts and feel more !
Enjoy creating and be serious about your futur !

Greatings from Stijn Gabeler
@GODOGOOD introduction presentation = promotion = projects = people = plannings = profit

@GODOGOOD introduction presentation = promotion = projects = people = plannings = profit :)

mysteryperson123 · Mar 12, 2008, 12:41 AM

Can anyone who reads this and wants me to know what they think tell me how old they are (If you want to) I am trying to find out what age the people who like the book are because it seems that children my age find my language slightly confusing and do not enjoy my book that much. Adults seem to prefer it ( from how many people have read it that I know the age of so far ).
GODOGOOD I do enjoy creating. I am pretty creative. I draw, I read, I write and I made a clay model of a dragon which I made a stop motion animation film with.
I am not trying to boast or anything.

EMber4381 · Mar 14, 2008, 06:01 PM

How About Dandy's Resurrection.. just an Idea

mysteryperson123 · Mar 15, 2008, 02:02 AM

Thank you for your contribution, you are the first person to offer a suggestion in a while.

mysteryperson123 · Mar 23, 2008, 09:55 AM

Any ideas on what to call my story would be appreciated.

mysteryperson123 · Mar 25, 2008, 08:48 AM

This thread is not used at all anymore. Anyone who reads the book please comment.

Lief_of_Del · Mar 28, 2008, 01:50 AM

Sorry I'm sick at the moment and can't get on much
When I get back I wlll answer any questions or try to give suggestions if you want
I really do like the idea though

mysteryperson123 · Apr 6, 2008, 04:57 AM

I have recently had some critiques on my work so I have edited it. I don't know why I bother to post in this discussion anymore as nobody answers.

Life_Coach · Apr 6, 2008, 05:15 AM

Hi Mystery Person, I really like your book and would love to read it once completed.

Your efforts will not go in vain...

As for a name, The best idea I have had is "SHAPE SHIFTERS",simple and something you definitely want to know more about.
If you do not get that right now, do not let it bother you, the right name will come to you when you least expect it.

But until then, continue with the great efforts, and please don't forget to send a copy to me.

mysteryperson123 · Apr 7, 2008, 04:32 AM

I will. Thanks. My story has been edited and a lot of the one posted on this thread have been changed to be made better. "Shape Shifters" is a very good idea for a title and is similar to the one I thought of which is "Two-Souled" another word for Shape Shifter, according to my book.