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    Mumu Posts: 35, Reputation: 1
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    #1

    Oct 29, 2007, 06:54 AM
    How can I rewrite this sentence
    I'm not thorough in english literature.. so can any one help me rewrite this

    "tryn' to revert you back when im precious ..not hang on you when im null"


    Like I need you back when I'm strong not to hang on you when I'm weak.. something like this.. I want it in good english or maybe in literature.. I'm serious :rolleyes:

    Yet another idea ? ;\\
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    Oct 29, 2007, 07:00 AM
    Hm... Can't quite understand what you are asking. Specify?
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    Oct 29, 2007, 07:02 AM
    It could be to do with something about being a burden to someone? (null: nothing)
    And the person wanting who they are referring to to remember them when they were precious?
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    Oct 29, 2007, 07:10 AM
    This is not my purpose I know what it mean , I did write it but I feel it's a bad english
    Plus you now confirm this to me ;\ damn

    My friend leave her lover because he feels so unlike with weak personality.. so he choose to leave her this time but not forever , until he end some exams and maybe to fix his psychological problim..

    So he want to write a sentence to announce her that " i love you i'll back to you but not now "..

    Amm..
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    Oct 29, 2007, 07:24 AM
    You are too precious to be with me now. Because I don't want to hurt you, I will return to you, my love, when I have figured myself out.
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    Oct 29, 2007, 08:34 AM
    Waw anon699.. that's better thanks pro :))
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    Oct 29, 2007, 08:47 AM
    Quote Originally Posted by Mumu
    waw anon699 .. that's better thanks pro :))

    You're welcome. It's not the best but I tried.
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