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Coldest day in September
One I try to forget
Do you want to remember?
The darkest day yet

Anyway here's some new poem things I've written, hope I got A lot better.

How did you manage to find the door
Into my soul?
Falling down through my eyes
Into a heart that's numb
There's...

Wow, haven't been on here sense I was maybe 11. Now I'm 14 and looking back at this I can't help but laugh at myself

We all hold back in silence
Afraid to fight
All your tears fade away
You can't cry
I stand beside you
Open your eyes
I know that this
Won't be the last lie

Say your not strong

Stay love
Come to me and stay awhile
Never leave again
Me here with my lonnyness
Never hide away
Just close your eyes
And find me

Come to me
Bring your sorrow

Tell me how to be
Strong enough
Tell me how to be
Good enough
Tell me how to be enough
For your love

They live with the fear
Bound to their tears
I'm letting you know

Do you feel alone?
Close your eyes your safe in the dark
Do you feel alone?
When they come and pass you by
Like your that kid out of line
Now tell me do you feel alone

We walk bleeding, lost...

Can't forget my Solitude
Don't want to leave this Solitude
Forever bound with my Solitude
Never forgot this becaues...
I couldn't let you go

Never said you were at fault
Just turns out were...

Are you always cold?
Is this how you want to be?
Alone

Is there more to you?
Will you see past their minds
Find the truth

Dirty mirror
I can't find myself

Frozen whisper
Passing my lips
Holding you in place
Pull me down
To your sweet kisses
Pleading for forgivness

In there eye's
I see the fear
Burnging into their minds

How many days have gone by?
Hard to tell in this blinding light
When will the sun come down?
Stop telling me to give up,
No not now!

Ooo, Where are you?
It's only far
After all they've put...

How long will it be?
Before you see me
Not what they tell you
Just simply the truth
I never said that I was down again
They think I don't know but I see them laughing
How about one more day?...

Do you remember me?
Becaues I still remember you
I'm feeling so alone now
I believed in you
Where has are love gone?
Stolen away becaues we were so young
I simply cry myself to sleep at night...

I understand that. Good answer

If your going down
Then take me with you
If your going to scream
Let yourself be heard
But if your going to take my world away
Then you better leave

Not afraid to live my life
And I know...

It's all true
I'm about to break
But, now that your gone
I'm a little unsure
Maybe it's in my mind
Breaking free to take over our lifes
Maybe it's in my mind
Here to take over all of me
...

Don't try to scream, don't try to break through
He'll only believe in what he sees
Breaking out, falling down, and bleeding dry
And to think, I thought I'd reach the top
But, now I've found
That...

Wow that's awsome! Thank you.

Cool, I'd be interested in that if you can post it up.

Ok, thanks but, I want to know. Will the singing lessions really be worth it? Will it really bring out my voice and make me sound better and not just show me how to sing silent night and stuff. I...

Tell me how I cannot see
What lies deep inside of me
You've heard the screams
I've watched her bleed
And you say I can't be her anymore
Without even knowing

Laying low
She pleads for my...

Ah, love paramore; going to their concert this Sunday. Anyway that's cool that you can sing different styles; I'm just getting started.:D

Thanks, and I know what you mean by the chior I thought it would help but, it's making me sound worse and I also lission to Kittie and Amy Lee of Evanescence, Wow those are going to be hard to match.

So, my Because is in this band and I really want to be in it. It's an all guy band and I'm a girl but, I think he would let me do some back-up volcals (Can't spell, lol) I've asked this before but,...

Night fills the sky with darkness
We can't hear your screams of fear
No light to allow your escape
Forever you'll be with me
In this madness

Don't try to save me
I'll find my way out
You'll see who I can be
Never thought of the world
As a place to fear
Who am I?
To say I've fallen down
And you'll never
Have to cry again
Becaues...

Just get out there and sing! I only wish I could sing half as good as the people at my school and all they do is cry about how their not good enough and stuff, Sorry for my out burst. But, do...

;)Hey, I have posted a lot of things on here about songwrighting but, now I would like to move on into singing. I've been told by my best friend that I suck but, by others that I'm good. I thought...

Gosh, I wish I could sing! I would be singing these things all the time.


Look at her
In that broken mirror
Hidden away
Becaues we couldn't
Take more
Of the lies, the words of hate
I was...

Though were different
We can't be apart
We've been through drama and lies
But, the laughter meands my broken heart
I will never trust anyone else
My secrets are her's

Sorry if it sounds to...

Thanks!

Our world changes day to day
When night paints the sky black
When we lose a life to heavans shining light
Or as snow fills the earth with a bitter chill
We dream to see what lies before us
A...

Sparkling lights of joy and love
Drawl us closer to Chrismas day
We all dream in silence
Snow converts the earth
As an ice blancet to numb
The burning core

My friend Emily. To help you out we like to joke around and we can tell each other anything.

I don't know why I wrote this:p


Where has my love gone?
I'm so lost in myself
Trapped alone with my own thoughts
The screams of my
Lonlyyness
Remains unheard
Before all is lost will

Sure let's do it! What did you have in mind?

Ya I do. Just not random stuff in each verse or something like that, I know what you mean.

Just saying; now that I've been wrighting a lot on here I've learned that a song doesn't need to be verse, choris, verse, choris, end. I mean do any bands not do that? I don't like it. And I'm...

Ok, I'm not trying to copy any songs here but, please check out Field of innocence by Evanecence. I think that the music sounds awsome and something like that would sound great here; thanks.


He...

Ya, my friend. She's into a lot of bad stuff and now I can't even talk to her anymore and there's nothing I can't do. And I wouldn't mind at all if you helped me out with it.

Wow! This site has helped me so much! Thanks for your help; Evreybody.


Something's changed
In the earth
All I know now
Seems not to matter
Each second counts for something
I know this...

Save her...
Save her...
So many qiuqtions whiper
Screaming at me that I'm lost
A locked door
Of fogton memorys
Long ago this was my refuge
Now I see all my wrongs
Have taken you

This is more me I think. My teacher said one day that he want's us to be perfect and I thought that he was foolish for saying that becaues we will never be perfect; you can lie and hide your flaws...

It's good and clever. But, try to think about each emotion you were feeling at momeant. Just beacues one word sounds good with another doesn't mean you have to wright it.:)

That depends on the wrighter. I mean, if you want a happy song and you ask someone that's not living that life; then it may be harder.

Wow, thank you. And just practice and practice and you'll get better. Sing about different things around the house then the words will just come to you.

Sun setting behinde me
All fallen have rose
Whispering that I need to try
I stand in the middle
Hearing each word
Screaming to decode
Your heart breaking thoughts
Somehow I know
That this was...

Feels like I've hit rock bottom
Love life and maybe heaven will give you a turn
I push, push closing the door
Just you and me in the dark
You can't save me

Heart breaking silence
Screaming in...

Yeah, thank you. But, my life isn't all dark and gloom it's just the wrighting that brings it out.
Just so you know...

Well, I guess it could be but, the second one is about a friend of mine that died and the other is just random