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Feedback immediately I want to know if I should go with this

Pain is love,
Impacts your heart like the stain of blood,
You can't just drain the flood,
Of feelings you came to dub,
Now I've gained a flame of grudge,
That can't be contained by the light...

Again comment it up so I can see wha u guys think...

Give me some comments on wha u think

My mind is starting to clear like a fogged up mirror,
Trying to steer my life in the right gear,
So stay clear for death and love is all I fear,
My mind is racing, my body pacing,
My soul needs...

My head is racing with complex tensions,
Blinding my eyes visions,
I'm trapped in another deminsion,
And as I sit I'm constiplating all my bad decisions,
Life doesn't even seem worth living,
...