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    Feb 6, 2013, 08:08 PM
    School crime research paper
    Hello,

    I am a new friend here and I need help from every body here..

    I have a research paper about school crime and I would like to talk about cause and effect of school crime and how can school reduce crime..

    I need help with doing an out line and theses statement please,because I have difficulty writing in English because I am an International student.

    Thank you so much..
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    Feb 6, 2013, 08:41 PM
    School crime is a huge topic. How long does this paper have to be?
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    Feb 6, 2013, 08:43 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    School crime is a huge topic. How long does this paper have to be?
    Thank you so much for answering me.
    It will be 11 pages.
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    Feb 6, 2013, 08:46 PM
    Let's do an outline first.

    I. Introduction

    II. Types of school crime
    A.
    B.
    C.

    III. Ways to reduce school crime
    A.
    B.
    C.

    IV. Research on school crime

    V. Conclusion
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    Feb 6, 2013, 08:47 PM
    What kinds of school crime?
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    Feb 6, 2013, 08:52 PM
    Okay
    I. Introduction

    II. School crime
    A. Theft
    B. Vandalism
    C. assault
    D.vandalism
    E.Fighting

    III. Ways to reduce school crime
    A. Put strict penalties for students who assault others.
    B. Warning students who attend sharp instruments to school.
    C. Dismissal from school for those who start fighting and violence for a week.


    This idea what I have until now and may be I have Grammar mistake.
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    Feb 6, 2013, 08:54 PM
    You have vandalism listed twice. What about cheating? Assault and fighting are very similar. What about bullying?
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    Feb 6, 2013, 08:54 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    What kinds of school crime?
    Theft, vandalism, assault, verbal harassment, abuse andfighting
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    Feb 6, 2013, 08:55 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    You have vandalism listed twice. What about cheating?
    It is a great Idea, I have twice because I made a mistake
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    Feb 6, 2013, 08:57 PM
    I read a about bulling but I don't have enough sources for it
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    Feb 6, 2013, 09:04 PM
    I. Introduction

    II. Types of school crime

    A. Theft
    B. Vandalism
    C. Fighting
    D. Bullying
    E. Cheating

    III. Ways to reduce school crime

    A. Theft
    1. Punishments
    a. Strict penalties
    b.
    2. Preventions
    a.
    b.

    B. Vandalism
    1. Penalties
    2. Preventions

    C. Fighting
    1. Punishments
    a. Suspensions
    b.
    2. Preventions
    a.
    b.

    D. Bullying
    1. Punishments
    a.
    b.
    2. Preventions
    a.
    b.

    E. Cheating
    1. Punishments
    a.
    b.
    2. Preventions
    a.
    b.

    III. Research on school crime -- stats

    IV. Conclusion
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    Feb 6, 2013, 09:07 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by nora moon View Post
    I read a bout bulling but I don't have enough sources for it
    Go to the library. Lots of sources.

    When is this due?
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    Feb 6, 2013, 09:23 PM
    It will be in February 25

    Thank you so much for your help..
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    Feb 7, 2013, 09:33 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    You have vandalism listed twice. What about cheating? Assault and fighting are very similar. What about bullying?
    Hey, actually I complete my outline and I tried to come up with my theses statement.
    I do not if it is good one or not.

    This is my theses statement: school crime is a serious problem that can dramatically affect the ability of students to progress academically and socially. A comprehensive intervention plan that involves all students, parents, and school staff is required to ensure that all students can learn in a safe and fear-free environment.
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    Feb 7, 2013, 09:43 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by nora moon View Post
    Hey, actually I complete my outline and I tried to come up with my theses statement.
    I do not if it is good one or not.

    This is my theses statement: school crime is a serious problem that can dramatically affect the ability of students to progress academically and socially. A comprehensive intervention plan that involves all students, parents, and school staff is required to ensure that all students can learn in a safe and fear-free environment.
    It is very good but it doesn't sound like you at all! Did you copy it from somewhere?
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    Feb 7, 2013, 09:44 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    It is very good but it doesn't sound like you at all! Did you copy it from somewhere?
    Actually I got some idea from some where :(
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    Feb 7, 2013, 09:50 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by nora moon View Post
    Actually I got some idea from some where :(
    So you are doing well with this so far?
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    Feb 7, 2013, 09:53 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    So you are doing well with this so far?
    This is mine: School crime is a difficult problem which is become more widely spread in school which can affect many students in their progress academically and socially.
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    Feb 7, 2013, 09:57 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by nora moon View Post
    This is mine: School crime is a difficult problem which is become more widely spread in school which can affect many students in their progress academically and socially.
    I like the other one better :).
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    Feb 7, 2013, 09:59 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    I like the other one better :).
    Really, because I am not sure about it and this is my first research I am doing in English :)

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