[nothing lasts]

WHEN LIFE IS SO CRUEL
AND I DON4T KNOW WHAT TO DO
Never forget me because I love u
I think about you no matter where your
Your eyes are so bright like a shining star
And no matter where the star is
I know your not far

(CHORUS)
U changed my way of thinking
In everything that I do
And wherever I go
The face I see is u
Never will I let my love go
My love for u
Will never be through
I have met many persons
But not a person like u


SO MANY ways I can do this
But I chose this way
Your the most person that I love
And that's all I have to say
No 1 listens to me the way you do
No 1 has the patience 2
There is absolutely no 1 like u
(CHORUS)

[redhed35]

I liked it,perhaps change the word person, to girl or boy, maybe?

Is it a slow song, or rock, or haunting melody you had in mind?

[Clough]

Hi, nothing lasts!

Yes, you've got a good start there!

Do you know about rhythm and meter, please?

I would also suggest to you not to use the chat speak abbreviations. Using them just makes things hard to understand here.

Thanks!

[nothing lasts]

Yeah OK!! thanks for your comments!

[nothing lasts]

I have many songs and I am a good singer 2.my dream is to go to american idol!

[Clough]

Okay.

Thanks!