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    nothing lasts Posts: 71, Reputation: 2
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    #1

    Oct 16, 2009, 07:54 AM
    Am I good at writing songs?
    WHEN LIFE IS SO CRUEL
    AND I DON4T KNOW WHAT TO DO
    Never forget me because I love u
    I think about you no matter where your
    Your eyes are so bright like a shining star
    And no matter where the star is
    I know your not far

    (CHORUS)
    U changed my way of thinking
    In everything that I do
    And wherever I go
    The face I see is u
    Never will I let my love go
    My love for u
    Will never be through
    I have met many persons
    But not a person like u


    SO MANY ways I can do this
    But I chose this way
    Your the most person that I love
    And that's all I have to say
    No 1 listens to me the way you do
    No 1 has the patience 2
    There is absolutely no 1 like u
    (CHORUS)
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    redhed35 Posts: 4,221, Reputation: 1910
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    #2

    Oct 16, 2009, 07:59 AM

    I liked it,perhaps change the word person, to girl or boy, maybe?

    Is it a slow song, or rock, or haunting melody you had in mind?
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    Clough Posts: 26,677, Reputation: 1649
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    #3

    Oct 17, 2009, 12:21 AM
    Hi, nothing lasts!

    Yes, you've got a good start there!

    Do you know about rhythm and meter, please?

    I would also suggest to you not to use the chat speak abbreviations. Using them just makes things hard to understand here.

    Thanks!
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    nothing lasts Posts: 71, Reputation: 2
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    #4

    Jan 2, 2010, 10:57 AM

    Yeah OK!! thanks for your comments!
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    #5

    Jan 2, 2010, 10:58 AM
    I have many songs and I am a good singer 2.my dream is to go to american idol!
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    #6

    Jan 2, 2010, 02:36 PM
    Okay.

    Thanks!

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