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    Nov 9, 2006, 03:29 AM
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    I have to write this sentence on trains, is it correct?


    "Dear passengers, we recommend to mind your luggage and personal belongings"


    Or do you think is better this other one?

    "Passengers are kindly requested to mind their luggage and personal belongings"
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    Nov 9, 2006, 03:41 AM
    Quote Originally Posted by andrearnese

    "Passengers are kindly requested to mind their luggage and personal belongings"
    I personally prefer this one :)
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    Nov 12, 2006, 06:16 PM
    Como estas
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    Nov 12, 2006, 06:16 PM
    Hola
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    Nov 12, 2006, 06:18 PM
    Hola
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    Nov 13, 2006, 01:20 AM
    Quote Originally Posted by nadal
    hola
    Ciao!
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    Feb 7, 2007, 02:51 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by andrearnese
    I have to write this sentence on trains, is it correct?


    "Dear passengers, we recommend to mind your luggage and personal belongings"


    or do you think is better this other one?

    "Passengers are kindly requested to mind their luggage and personal belongings"
    I like the 2 one it sound like you are more smart use that one
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    Nov 3, 2007, 11:36 AM
    Quote Originally Posted by andrearnese
    I have to write this sentence on trains, is it correct?


    "Dear passengers, we recommend to mind your luggage and personal belongings"


    or do you think is better this other one?

    "Passengers are kindly requested to mind their luggage and personal belongings"
    Err.. second one sounds more official.. so go for the second one
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    Nov 3, 2007, 02:30 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by andrearnese
    I have to write this sentence on trains, is it correct?


    "Dear passengers, we recommend to mind your luggage and personal belongings"


    or do you think is better this other one?

    "Passengers are kindly requested to mind their luggage and personal belongings"
    I'd say the second was more appropriate. It sounds more polite, friendly and to-the-point.
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    Nov 30, 2007, 04:19 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by andrearnese
    I have to write this sentence on trains, is it correct?


    "Dear passengers, we recommend to mind your luggage and personal belongings"


    or do you think is better this other one?

    "Passengers are kindly requested to mind their luggage and personal belongings"
    The second one buy change the word care to safe guard

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