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    #1

    Nov 29, 2011, 03:08 PM
    How do you use revision in a sentence.
    My test is about sentence structure and I don't know how to use revision in a sentence.
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    #2

    Nov 29, 2011, 03:17 PM
    I think you just did. Post it again with a minor change and you will have your second revision.
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    #3

    Nov 29, 2011, 03:19 PM
    In a sentence that I did not know.
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    #4

    Nov 29, 2011, 03:25 PM
    'The editor approved my fourth revision, so the manuscript goes to the publisher tomorrow.'
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    #5

    Nov 29, 2011, 03:30 PM
    Hey thanks for the reddie. I was not joking, you did use the word and, if read my answer completely, you'd see how I used it. You did not ask how to write a sentence that used the word in a manner that also defines or explains the word. Joy gets a greenie from me for trying, hope you don't dump on her too.
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    #6

    Nov 29, 2011, 03:33 PM
    (I gave you 2 greenies ballenger.. )
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    Nov 29, 2011, 03:34 PM
    (Psssst. I gave him one also.)
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    #8

    Nov 29, 2011, 03:37 PM
    TX guys, I am staying off homework help for now.There is a rash of reddie going on this week
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    #9

    Nov 29, 2011, 03:40 PM
    Won't matter, ballenger. As long as this rating system is in place, you cannot outrun the reddies.
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    #10

    Nov 29, 2011, 03:41 PM
    Yep, but I can spread greenies left and right
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    #11

    Jan 15, 2012, 04:09 PM
    Were made out on this one

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