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crystalfirecup
Nov 29, 2011, 03:08 PM
My test is about sentence structure and I don't know how to use revision in a sentence.

ballengerb1
Nov 29, 2011, 03:17 PM
I think you just did. Post it again with a minor change and you will have your second revision.

crystalfirecup
Nov 29, 2011, 03:19 PM
In a sentence that I did not know.

joypulv
Nov 29, 2011, 03:25 PM
'The editor approved my fourth revision, so the manuscript goes to the publisher tomorrow.'

ballengerb1
Nov 29, 2011, 03:30 PM
Hey thanks for the reddie. I was not joking, you did use the word and, if read my answer completely, you'd see how I used it. You did not ask how to write a sentence that used the word in a manner that also defines or explains the word. Joy gets a greenie from me for trying, hope you don't dump on her too.

joypulv
Nov 29, 2011, 03:33 PM
(I gave you 2 greenies ballenger.. )

Wondergirl
Nov 29, 2011, 03:34 PM
(Psssst. I gave him one also.)

ballengerb1
Nov 29, 2011, 03:37 PM
TX guys, I am staying off homework help for now.There is a rash of reddie going on this week

Wondergirl
Nov 29, 2011, 03:40 PM
Won't matter, ballenger. As long as this rating system is in place, you cannot outrun the reddies.

ballengerb1
Nov 29, 2011, 03:41 PM
Yep, but I can spread greenies left and right

ballengerb1
Jan 15, 2012, 04:09 PM
Were made out on this one