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Everyone agrees that adolescence is the unhappiest time in most people's lives. However some people knows that is a challenging time when young people have to make sense of the world and themselves.

There are many advantages to affirm that adolescence is the unhappiest time in most people's lives. Firstly, teenagers' body is in completely changes all the time and that make them more aggressive and irritable. Secondly, many people agrees that teenagers are always arguing about everything about cars, sports and fashion. Finally, many adolescents have to work in order to get money so they think that is the unhappiest time of their life.

However, there are many arguments against this statement. Firstly, most of adults say that adolescence is the best time of people lives because you can do something which most adults can not do. Secondly, most of them don't have to carry with big responsibilities. For example, adolescents can go out with friends while adults have to stay at home looking after their babies -if they have - or just cooking. Finally, they can wear everything without looking strange or feeling ashamed, because they don't matter what people think about them.

In conclusion, although many people think that adolescence is the most unhappiest time of their lives, it also has a positive side.

Everyone agrees that adolescence is the unhappiest time in an individual's life. However, some people know that is a challenging time when young people have to make sense of the world and themselves.

There is some evidence that adolescence is an unhappy time. First, a teenager's body is in continuous change which can cause emotions to fluctuate, making him aggressive and irritable one minute and calm and reasonable five minutes later. Secondly, many people agree that teenagers find ways to argue about anything and everything, including about cars, sports, and fashion. Finally, many adolescents have to work in order to get money, which might make them think that is the unhappiest time ever.

However, there are many arguments to refute this statement. First, many adults say that adolescence is the best of all times because the adolescent has the world by the tail and all of life ahead of him. Secondly, most adolescents don't have adult responsibilities, such as, adolescents can go out with friends while adults usually have homemaking, childcare, and homeowner tasks that consume their day. Finally, adolescents can wear whatever they wish without looking strange or out of place, often because it doesn't matter to them what people think.

In conclusion, although many people think that adolescence is the unhappiest time in an individual's life, the positives outweigh the negatives.

I would leave your last sentence as is, and not conclude that positives outweigh negatives.