Good Evening My Name Is Sky N Im 14. I Am Currently Working On My Personal Narrative And Im Having A Hard Time With My Punctuation And Grammatical Errors. My English Teacher Keeps Telling Me To Go Back And Revise Because I Also Have Punctuation Errors In My Dialog. If Anyone Has The Time Or Patience To Look At My Narrative And Give Me Some Tips/pointers That Would Be A Big Help.

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If you post your narrative I would be happy to help you. Now, understand that I won't do it for you, but I will give you some things to think about to guide you in the right direction.

I am very anal about punctuation, so you can rest assured I can help.

Also, please turn your caps off, as your post is hard to read with initial caps on every word.

Thanks.

Good Evening My Name Is Sky N Im 14. I Am Currently Working On My Personal Narrative And Im Having A Hard Time With My Punctuation And Grammatical Errors. My English Teacher Keeps Telling Me To Go Back And Revise Because I Also Have Punctuation Errors In My Dialog. If Anyone Has The Time Or Patience To Look At My Narrative And Give Me Some Tips/pointers That Would Be A Big Help.

{{thank You}}:d yeah I have the time to... ma names holly and I'm great ni my english class. so I think I can help u...

yeah i have the time to.... ma names holly and im great ni my english class.! so i think i can help u....

She's looking for help with punctuation. You don't seem to be able to use punctuation, or even spell correctly for that matter.

I'll make suggestions too. I know English grammar and punctuation inside and out.