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    MS Creative 08 Posts: 1, Reputation: 1
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    Feb 6, 2008, 03:51 PM
    Hi my name is sky, can some one revisie my narrative!
    Good Evening My Name Is Sky N Im 14. I Am Currently Working On My Personal Narrative And Im Having A Hard Time With My Punctuation And Grammatical Errors. My English Teacher Keeps Telling Me To Go Back And Revise Because I Also Have Punctuation Errors In My Dialog. If Anyone Has The Time Or Patience To Look At My Narrative And Give Me Some Tips/pointers That Would Be A Big Help.

    {{thank You}}:d
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    Feb 6, 2008, 03:54 PM
    If you post your narrative I would be happy to help you. Now, understand that I won't do it for you, but I will give you some things to think about to guide you in the right direction.

    I am very anal about punctuation, so you can rest assured I can help.

    Also, please turn your caps off, as your post is hard to read with initial caps on every word.

    Thanks.
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    Feb 6, 2008, 03:55 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by MS Creative 08
    Good Evening My Name Is Sky N Im 14. I Am Currently Working On My Personal Narrative And Im Having A Hard Time With My Punctuation And Grammatical Errors. My English Teacher Keeps Telling Me To Go Back And Revise Because I Also Have Punctuation Errors In My Dialog. If Anyone Has The Time Or Patience To Look At My Narrative And Give Me Some Tips/pointers That Would Be A Big Help.

    {{thank You}}:d
    yeah I have the time to... ma names holly and I'm great ni my english class. so I think I can help u...
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    Feb 6, 2008, 03:57 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by hollymlawton
    yeah i have the time to.... ma names holly and im great ni my english class.! so i think i can help u....
    She's looking for help with punctuation. You don't seem to be able to use punctuation, or even spell correctly for that matter.
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    Feb 6, 2008, 04:11 PM
    I'll make suggestions too. I know English grammar and punctuation inside and out.

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