Can someone help with proof reading a letter for checking grammar and areas.

John Do
25 5th Ave
Bethlehem, PA 18018
July 14, 2005

Dear Hiring Manager:

I am writing you in regard to the growth and expansion of your clean room as mentioned in the business section of the morning call on July 14, 2005.

My previews employer has move their product line over seas eliminating my position. I am now seeking new employment with a establish firm to continue my career.

I have over eight years of experience working in the semiconductor field as an install and support technician and IT support technician. Iím also a full time student at Northampton Community College majoring in Networking.

Please feel free to contact me with the number or e-mail address listed above. I have included my resume for your review. I am eager to meet with you and to discuss any entry-level opportunity for employment with Air Products.


John Do