It's excellent! (btw, plural nouns do not get apostrophes -- "kisses," not "kiss's" and "hugs," not "hug's" and "thanks," not "thank's" -- apostrophes are for possessives, belonging to something or someone, like "Nathan's gloves")
Have you put it to music yet?
Be careful posting your songs on the Internet. They become fair game for anyone who wants to steal them, add music, and get them recorded. I'd hate for you to be listening to the radio one day and hear your song coming out of it when you didn't get it published.