Ask Experts Questions for FREE Help !
Ask
    Abc321ab's Avatar
    Abc321ab Posts: 10, Reputation: 1
    New Member
    		  
    #1

    Oct 13, 2013, 08:41 PM
    Need a tag line for my cleaning business please help
    This is a residential and commercial cleaning company.. The name of the company is True Sparkle cleaning. The only tag lines I thought of were:
    1.cleaning made easy.
    2. Where your cleaning needs come true.
    Can you please help me with a better line/slogan? Thanks
    Wondergirl's Avatar
    Wondergirl Posts: 39,354, Reputation: 5431
    Jobs & Parenting Expert
    		  
    #2

    Oct 13, 2013, 08:53 PM
    Gleam and glow -- that's how you'll know.
    We'll dazzle you!
    Abc321ab's Avatar
    Abc321ab Posts: 10, Reputation: 1
    New Member
    		  
    #3

    Oct 13, 2013, 08:54 PM
    What do you think of the ones I mentioned?
    Wondergirl's Avatar
    Wondergirl Posts: 39,354, Reputation: 5431
    Jobs & Parenting Expert
    		  
    #4

    Oct 13, 2013, 08:58 PM
    Not at all catchy or memorable. You need a tag line that connects with and reminds a person of "sparkle" -- like, "Oh, yeah, that Sparkle cleaning company."
    Abc321ab's Avatar
    Abc321ab Posts: 10, Reputation: 1
    New Member
    		  
    #5

    Oct 13, 2013, 08:59 PM
    If this was your company what would be your tagline?
    Wondergirl's Avatar
    Wondergirl Posts: 39,354, Reputation: 5431
    Jobs & Parenting Expert
    		  
    #6

    Oct 13, 2013, 09:02 PM
    We'll dazzle you!
    Abc321ab's Avatar
    Abc321ab Posts: 10, Reputation: 1
    New Member
    		  
    #7

    Oct 14, 2013, 07:16 AM
    What about the ones I came up with?
    The other sparkle is In your eye
    It's all we leave behind
    We stand behind our sparkle
    The sparkle to count on
    Our name is our promise
    We outsparkle the rest
    We dazzle your wold
    Wondergirl's Avatar
    Wondergirl Posts: 39,354, Reputation: 5431
    Jobs & Parenting Expert
    		  
    #8

    Oct 14, 2013, 07:29 AM
    Whatever works for you. It needs to be short and punchy and memorable. If I were you, I'd make a list of your favorites and pas it out to strangers, friends, and family members as a "check your favorite tag line" survey.
Not your question? Ask your question View similar questions
 

Question Tools Search this Question
Search this Question:

Advanced Search

Add your answer here.


Check out some similar questions!

I just started a cleaning business and am leaning to doing commercial cleaning. [ 0 Answers ]

I started a commercial cleaning business and have a friend that has a lot of knowledge and contacts with people that could use cleaning services and is a hard worker. He is not my partner, but has been with me since the beginning in discussions of who to market and he even purchased business cards...

I just opened a small cleaning business but no business help? [ 8 Answers ]

I just opened a small residential, commercial and janitrial business but I am not getting any responses. I have joined the chamber of commerce, I am listed on Google, natinal black pages, have a website and angies list. I don't know what else to do. I have been open 2 months and I am thinking of...

Condensate line cleaning [ 10 Answers ]

Does one use clorox or ammonia to help clean out a condensate line. We found the pan for the AC FULL of water. Don't know if just water will flush out condensate line, or will it need clorox/etc?

Condensate line cleaning [ 5 Answers ]

I have to clean out a 3/4" condensate line on a 3 story building. There are 2-90 degree elbows and then a straight run of 30". Is there a snake or tubing jet that I can use to clean out. Jim

Cleaning business [ 3 Answers ]

I am interested on starting a small cleaning service. How do I get in contact with the main person to see if they would let me clean their company? Do I need a license :rolleyes:

View more questions Search