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    Apr 4, 2013, 05:35 PM
    Poem
    What do you think? I wrote this poem myself.

    There he is.
    Staring into her eyes-
    Like a baby when he sees a new toy.
    He was my dream.
    His brown eyes had there own sun.
    And my story- which he was.
    He could win the heart of any girl.
    But, yet he was waiting for her.
    My stomach twirled, like a baton.
    My heart beat increased, a million times faster.
    I was excited, hoping he would ask me-
    But yet, he asked her.
    She wasn't any girl-
    She was barbie herself in skin and bones.
    He had to get all the words out of him.
    It was hard for me to watch- me a childhood friend.
    His perfection was in my every thought-
    Yet she managed to reply-
    The answer that broke my heart-
    The one that made all time freeze.
    She said,
    "Sure, I'd really love to be your girlfriend."
    ~my end~




    My childhood friend, he was my shoulder to lean on, and know my love has grown to be much more.

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