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    Dec 3, 2012, 10:47 PM
    Poem help
    So I have to write a poem does this sound OK
    Outside you see a happy, cheerful person
    But on the inside beholds a different story
    You see nobody can tell what she is holding in
    All she knows is that she is ready to give in

    She just wants to break free from this demon that is eating her away
    But it just seems like it wants to stay

    She cries herself to sleep at night
    Wondering if this is going to be her new life
    She knows she needs to be tough and fight
    But her heart is becoming weaker and weaker

    She goes through life with grief and misery
    It’s like a thief robbed her happiness away

    She is a fragile lost soul in this world
    Feeling trapped and is in need to escape
    She looks to god for answers
    But feels like he isn’t there

    She looks at what is next to her
    Debating if she should do it
    Maybe it would release the agony?
    But only for a short time
    She looks at the scars of her past

    It is not done yet but I would like to hear your thoughts

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