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    Jul 7, 2012, 06:40 AM
    Story writing
    I have been given a project to write story on the described seen...
    "the horse stood in hind legs,snorted andburst into a fury of speed that was the loveliest thing i had ever seen." please help me
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    Jul 7, 2012, 07:07 AM
    First, let's correct that sentence. It should be:

    The horse stood on hind legs, snorted, and burst into a fury of speed that was the loveliest thing I have ever seen.

    Okay -- well, you could write a romance, a western, or a mystery. You could even go with science fiction or fantasy. That's the first thing you have to decide. So, tell me what kind of a story will this be?
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    Jul 7, 2012, 11:20 AM
    Please write the story in any kind as you like... and thanks for your interest in my que.
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    Jul 7, 2012, 11:28 AM
    No, no, no. This is YOUR story, not mine. I was trying to help. If you expect me to do all the work, I will no longer help.
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    Jul 7, 2012, 11:53 AM
    I am sorry... please write it as a romantic story... I need your help.. please
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    Jul 7, 2012, 11:56 AM
    I will not write your story. YOU will write your story.

    You need a male and a female for your story. What are their names?
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:00 PM
    Let their names to be Heer and Ranjha.
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:04 PM
    Which one owns the horse? Is that person riding it?
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:08 PM
    I am an INDIAN boy aged 17 yrs. If I will make any mistake please forgive me.. . may I ask you a que.? Please don't be angery... what should I call u??
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:10 PM
    I think Heer, the female owns the horse...
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:11 PM
    Call me WG (short for Wondergirl).

    So what about my questions?

    Is it nighttime in India? Should you be in bed?
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:16 PM
    The horse stood on hind legs, snorted, and burst into a fury of speed that was the loveliest thing I have ever seen. Heer hung on tightly with her arms around the horse's neck. Her beautiful long hair blew free in the wind behind her.

    Ranjha is watching all this. He falls instantly in love. What does he like about Heer and about what he sees?
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:18 PM
    Yes WG I should to be in bed... but I can stay here for some more time with u...
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:21 PM
    When is this due?

    For homeschooling? Or ESL class?

    Go to bed, I am always here.
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:21 PM
    He likes her eyes...
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:23 PM
    But she is riding fast on a horse and he cannot see her eyes. Or did he see her earlier somewhere?
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:25 PM
    Acctuly this project is for my friend... he have to deposit it Monday... i.e. after 2 days...
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    #18

    Jul 7, 2012, 12:26 PM
    So why are we doing your friend's work for him? Are his arms broken?
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:27 PM
    He saw her earlier in a garden, plucking flowers...
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    Jul 7, 2012, 12:30 PM
    No, no. he is not intrested in this... he said about this... I felt that I'm intrested in this so I am doing it for him or say for my interest...
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