[Moekie01]

A true poem about Middle school. Middle School is an intresting place full of style and wonder and grace like the way the teachers pick their nose or the way billy Joe flosses his toes the way they pack hairy gorrilas with the poor runts working on puberty or the rich ones stuck with people with poverty how the janitors tend to think they are principals and boss and tell us our own principles how the 'fun' classes are never fun and the boring classes always boring how the teachers talk about you right in front of your face and then your trated with such discrace the way they tend to telll you "you suck" by failing you or say "teachers pet" by getting beat up middle school is such a wonder parents think it is the worst but my friend just wait to discover the wonders of the no mans curse also known as High School

[Clough]

Hi, Moekie01!

Hey, good job! Was that the very first way that you wrote the poem, please?

Thanks!

[NeedKarma]

Tah si interesting to see your view when I was that age I don't remember feeling that way but times change I guess middle school can be tough for a lot of teens since there is a lot going on in their heads you know hormones and stuff well its all a passing phase I can assure you of that good luck with everyhting let us know if you have any questions we will spell it out clear as mud

[Clough]

Origianally posted by Moekie01

Yes that was the first way I wrote it

Hi again, Moekie01!

Would you like any suggestions as to how you might make some improvements to it, please?

Thanks1