[the black dagger]

Choras:
You can't control the rap,
The rap is the beat,
Don't you see,
I don't control the rap,
The rap controls me,
You can't control the rap,
Its just to cool,
Anyone who thinks there cooler,
Is just a flipping fool,


Look at me do you see what I see,
The future eminem feminem,
Nah,
the black dagger,
Its my new rap name,
My new game,
Not the same fame,
I'm not lame that's insane,
In the chain of Nylanders,
Not one has chosen this profession,
s' my confession I'm the first one,
The first son of a Nylander,
To be a rapper,
If I didn't make it my whole life would be a shatter,
And the people who hate rap,
Who do that,
Are the moodiest,crudiest,
Undudiest,
Old fools,
There like drool,
Being looked at in the street,
In the kind of way,
You know the one that says,
You a pain in the backside,
And that side,
The rap side,
Is the one I'm taking I'm not fakin,
I really believe in rap,
If there was none my life would sap,
Slowly,
No,
Quickly,
Nearly as quick as,
Rap its self,
And my health will leave me,
I wouldn't be I couldn't sleep,
I would be gone for eternity,
That is me you,
That is me,
What is me you,
Rap is me.]

(choras)

De rap its just the coolest thing on the surface,
Of the earths face,
So fast in slo-mo the rap can't go,
Yo,
The only thing its bad at huh,
Well anyway we've had that,
Pop,
Ye pop,
But were with r'r'rap now,
Raps got more wow,
Got more pow,
Don't ask me how,
I just know from raps tones,
I can feel it in my bones,
My mind just mouns,
For rap,
For that phenominem,
I go drop bombs on 'em,
When I start the rap,
I can't stop the rap,
I have know control,
I've given my soul,
Rap is me,
I am rap,
And that is what I live for,
Just give me more(echo)

Choras:

Ha its funny,
How rap makes money,
Money can save lives,
How easy it is to use knives,
For death,
Like macbeth,
Well rap can solve that,
Money for operations,
You just need a bit of patients(ha),
But what about the rap,
That's what we're talking about,
Join in the rap,
Stand up and just go shout,
Yo,
Cause the rap it blows my mind,
I can't unwind,
With the rap boomin in my ear holes,
All my fears of wierdos,
Who hate rap are done,
What's done has been done,
But rap isn't been done,
Its still goin' on,
s' bin here for a while,
But not lost its style,
That's what's great about it,
Its not had the slip,
Pop don't have the wit,
Rap has s' good music,
Rap, rap, raaaaaaaaaaaaaap.






That's it wadda you think

[shygrneyzs]

Well, I have heard worse.

[the black dagger]

Do you like it

[shygrneyzs]

Rap is not something I really listen to, I have a hard time understanding it with the sound mixed with lyrics. Must be my age or something. I can say I did not dislike it. I can somewhat understand your sense that rap is not just an extension of yourself, that rap is yourself. You identify with it and it has woven in with your ego and senses. It is your way of communicating. Nothing wrong with that.

[YoungPK]

I like rap. I also write raps. And I think that its good. Actually, I think its really good. Way to go! I have to ask a question however. I'm not a professional or anything and my songs don't get like put on the radio, nor do they make money, they just get heard by me and my friends. But I'd like to use some of the ideas you wrote. Not like word for word. And I guess I don't actually have to ask you. But I think its better to ask. You wrote it. Whether you're a pro or not, you own it in my mind because you wrote it and I respect that. So yeah, is it OK if I take a couple of the ideas. Not word for word. But a couple of the ideas of some of the lyrics. Like some of the rhymes and some of the words

[Talo12]

Pretty good, not the best I've seen but definitely not the worst. I'd like to hear what it sounds like. If you got a YouTube channel, record yourself rapping, post it and I'll check it out, just make sure to tell me your channel name