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    geetajohny Posts: 1, Reputation: 1
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    Jan 21, 2009, 05:43 AM
    Template of a business introductory letter
    Dear Mr. Jafar,

    It is a great pleasure to work with your respective organization. I would like to thank you very much for the time extended to me during our telephone conversation today.
    I am sure that understanding your requirements as well as having the opportunity to suggest solutions, stands as a solid ground towards building a mutually profitable business relationship.
    Kindly check the above attached files, xxxx contract agreement and the rates and note that you can use Tolkarm account number 42229 to move your future shipments.
    Please send me your inquiries related to all your cargo shipments imports as well as the exports and I値l quote you our best offers.

    If you need any further clarification please feel free to call me.
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    Clough Posts: 26,677, Reputation: 1649
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    Jan 21, 2009, 05:55 AM

    Hi, geetajohny!

    It looks good to me! The only thing, at this point, that I would suggest changing would the word shipments in the last line to shipment.

    Thanks!

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