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Junior Member
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Feb 6, 2013, 08:08 PM
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School crime research paper
Hello,
I am a new friend here and I need help from every body here..
I have a research paper about school crime and I would like to talk about cause and effect of school crime and how can school reduce crime..
I need help with doing an out line and theses statement please,because I have difficulty writing in English because I am an International student.
Thank you so much..
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Feb 6, 2013, 08:41 PM
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School crime is a huge topic. How long does this paper have to be?
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Junior Member
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Feb 6, 2013, 08:43 PM
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Originally Posted by Wondergirl
School crime is a huge topic. How long does this paper have to be?
Thank you so much for answering me.
It will be 11 pages.
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Feb 6, 2013, 08:46 PM
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Let's do an outline first.
I. Introduction
II. Types of school crime
A.
B.
C.
III. Ways to reduce school crime
A.
B.
C.
IV. Research on school crime
V. Conclusion
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Feb 6, 2013, 08:47 PM
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What kinds of school crime?
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Junior Member
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Feb 6, 2013, 08:52 PM
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Okay
I. Introduction
II. School crime
A. Theft
B. Vandalism
C. assault
D.vandalism
E.Fighting
III. Ways to reduce school crime
A. Put strict penalties for students who assault others.
B. Warning students who attend sharp instruments to school.
C. Dismissal from school for those who start fighting and violence for a week.
This idea what I have until now and may be I have Grammar mistake.
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Feb 6, 2013, 08:54 PM
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You have vandalism listed twice. What about cheating? Assault and fighting are very similar. What about bullying?
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Junior Member
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Feb 6, 2013, 08:54 PM
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Originally Posted by Wondergirl
What kinds of school crime?
Theft, vandalism, assault, verbal harassment, abuse andfighting
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Junior Member
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Feb 6, 2013, 08:55 PM
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Originally Posted by Wondergirl
You have vandalism listed twice. What about cheating?
It is a great Idea, I have twice because I made a mistake
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Junior Member
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Feb 6, 2013, 08:57 PM
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I read a about bulling but I don't have enough sources for it
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Feb 6, 2013, 09:04 PM
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I. Introduction
II. Types of school crime
A. Theft
B. Vandalism
C. Fighting
D. Bullying
E. Cheating
III. Ways to reduce school crime
A. Theft
1. Punishments
a. Strict penalties
b.
2. Preventions
a.
b.
B. Vandalism
1. Penalties
2. Preventions
C. Fighting
1. Punishments
a. Suspensions
b.
2. Preventions
a.
b.
D. Bullying
1. Punishments
a.
b.
2. Preventions
a.
b.
E. Cheating
1. Punishments
a.
b.
2. Preventions
a.
b.
III. Research on school crime -- stats
IV. Conclusion
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Feb 6, 2013, 09:07 PM
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Originally Posted by nora moon
I read a bout bulling but I don't have enough sources for it
Go to the library. Lots of sources.
When is this due?
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Junior Member
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Feb 6, 2013, 09:23 PM
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It will be in February 25
Thank you so much for your help..
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Junior Member
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Feb 7, 2013, 09:33 PM
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Originally Posted by Wondergirl
You have vandalism listed twice. What about cheating? Assault and fighting are very similar. What about bullying?
Hey, actually I complete my outline and I tried to come up with my theses statement.
I do not if it is good one or not.
This is my theses statement: school crime is a serious problem that can dramatically affect the ability of students to progress academically and socially. A comprehensive intervention plan that involves all students, parents, and school staff is required to ensure that all students can learn in a safe and fear-free environment.
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Feb 7, 2013, 09:43 PM
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Originally Posted by nora moon
Hey, actually I complete my outline and I tried to come up with my theses statement.
I do not if it is good one or not.
This is my theses statement: school crime is a serious problem that can dramatically affect the ability of students to progress academically and socially. A comprehensive intervention plan that involves all students, parents, and school staff is required to ensure that all students can learn in a safe and fear-free environment.
It is very good but it doesn't sound like you at all! Did you copy it from somewhere?
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Junior Member
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Feb 7, 2013, 09:44 PM
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Originally Posted by Wondergirl
It is very good but it doesn't sound like you at all! Did you copy it from somewhere?
Actually I got some idea from some where :(
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Feb 7, 2013, 09:50 PM
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Originally Posted by nora moon
Actually I got some idea from some where :(
So you are doing well with this so far?
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Junior Member
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Feb 7, 2013, 09:53 PM
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Originally Posted by Wondergirl
So you are doing well with this so far?
This is mine: School crime is a difficult problem which is become more widely spread in school which can affect many students in their progress academically and socially.
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Feb 7, 2013, 09:57 PM
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Originally Posted by nora moon
This is mine: School crime is a difficult problem which is become more widely spread in school which can affect many students in their progress academically and socially.
I like the other one better :).
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Junior Member
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Feb 7, 2013, 09:59 PM
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Originally Posted by Wondergirl
I like the other one better :).
Really, because I am not sure about it and this is my first research I am doing in English :)
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