[nora moon]

Hello,

I am a new friend here and I need help from every body here..

I have a research paper about school crime and I would like to talk about cause and effect of school crime and how can school reduce crime..

I need help with doing an out line and theses statement please,because I have difficulty writing in English because I am an International student.

Thank you so much..

[Wondergirl]

School crime is a huge topic. How long does this paper have to be?

[nora moon]

School crime is a huge topic. How long does this paper have to be?

Thank you so much for answering me.
It will be 11 pages.

[Wondergirl]

Let's do an outline first.

I. Introduction

II. Types of school crime
A.
B.
C.

III. Ways to reduce school crime
A.
B.
C.

IV. Research on school crime

V. Conclusion

[Wondergirl]

What kinds of school crime?

[nora moon]

Okay
I. Introduction

II. School crime
A. Theft
B. Vandalism
C. assault
D.vandalism
E.Fighting

III. Ways to reduce school crime
A. Put strict penalties for students who assault others.
B. Warning students who attend sharp instruments to school.
C. Dismissal from school for those who start fighting and violence for a week.


This idea what I have until now and may be I have Grammar mistake.

[Wondergirl]

You have vandalism listed twice. What about cheating? Assault and fighting are very similar. What about bullying?

[nora moon]

What kinds of school crime?

Theft, vandalism, assault, verbal harassment, abuse andfighting

[nora moon]

You have vandalism listed twice. What about cheating?

It is a great Idea, I have twice because I made a mistake

[nora moon]

I read a about bulling but I don't have enough sources for it

[Wondergirl]

I. Introduction

II. Types of school crime

A. Theft
B. Vandalism
C. Fighting
D. Bullying
E. Cheating

III. Ways to reduce school crime

A. Theft
1. Punishments
a. Strict penalties
b.
2. Preventions
a.
b.

B. Vandalism
1. Penalties
2. Preventions

C. Fighting
1. Punishments
a. Suspensions
b.
2. Preventions
a.
b.

D. Bullying
1. Punishments
a.
b.
2. Preventions
a.
b.

E. Cheating
1. Punishments
a.
b.
2. Preventions
a.
b.

III. Research on school crime -- stats

IV. Conclusion

[Wondergirl]

I read a bout bulling but I don't have enough sources for it

Go to the library. Lots of sources.

When is this due?

[nora moon]

It will be in February 25

Thank you so much for your help..

[nora moon]

You have vandalism listed twice. What about cheating? Assault and fighting are very similar. What about bullying?

Hey, actually I complete my outline and I tried to come up with my theses statement.
I do not if it is good one or not.

This is my theses statement: school crime is a serious problem that can dramatically affect the ability of students to progress academically and socially. A comprehensive intervention plan that involves all students, parents, and school staff is required to ensure that all students can learn in a safe and fear-free environment.

[Wondergirl]

Hey, actually I complete my outline and I tried to come up with my theses statement.
I do not if it is good one or not.

This is my theses statement: school crime is a serious problem that can dramatically affect the ability of students to progress academically and socially. A comprehensive intervention plan that involves all students, parents, and school staff is required to ensure that all students can learn in a safe and fear-free environment.

It is very good but it doesn't sound like you at all! Did you copy it from somewhere?

[nora moon]

It is very good but it doesn't sound like you at all! Did you copy it from somewhere?

Actually I got some idea from some where :(

[Wondergirl]

Actually I got some idea from some where :(

So you are doing well with this so far?

[nora moon]

So you are doing well with this so far?

This is mine: School crime is a difficult problem which is become more widely spread in school which can affect many students in their progress academically and socially.

[Wondergirl]

This is mine: School crime is a difficult problem which is become more widely spread in school which can affect many students in their progress academically and socially.

I like the other one better :).

[nora moon]

I like the other one better :).

Really, because I am not sure about it and this is my first research I am doing in English :)