okay so i wrote a poem and all my frends say they REALLY like it.....And im really not sure about it, but im really proud, Is IT GOOD?


look into Her happy life,
She Finally picks Up the Knife.

Sadness hidden behind her smile
Let it out, its been a while

husband yells and hits her twice,
if only he would treat her nice.

This time she runs and tries to fight
Holding The kinfe, Gripped tight.

With one more thrust it will all be done
Then She'll be the happy one

With this Knife she ends his life,
Finally ending the constant strife

As She Drinks her last bit of tea
For the first time, She feels Free


-Samm Murray [ME]

Well, it is good but I think it is actually quite morbid.

Morbid?

Heyy I'm only 14 lmao

I think it cool but it sounds frighting.

It IS frightening

Well I guess yeah its morbid... but I love it... =]

I love how it is, Its not about me its not about anyone I know
Its about one girl getting abused all her life and hiding it, and one day, she defeats her attacker
She's free She's her Own Girl Now, Im sry if you don't understand it like I do or feel the same way, but I love it :P

I like it!

I think that its really good! I like it