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tajuliet
May 7, 2013, 10:22 AM
I was surprised to see that Carson doesn't let his temper affect his future. When Benjamin failing class, his mother doesn't let him watch television or go outside play. She made him read books every week and report back to her. Because of his mother help, Benjamin became top in his class and started read every books subject. He determined to become a physician.

He earned his degree in Psychology at Yale University. While studies at Medical School of the University of Michigan, he became interested in neurosurgeons. After finished Medical School, he became a neurosurgery at Johns Hopkins Hospitals. In 1987, 70 members of surgical team including him operated to separated Siamese twins which usually resulted in died but his team operated successfully separated the Siamese twin.

smkanand
May 7, 2013, 10:24 AM
This is not forum for editing, grammar check or doing your homework. You have to do it yourself.