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FanFatale
Oct 26, 2012, 02:41 PM
I can feel the pain in her words
A victim of the fame
I can feel it so hard that it hurts
She had lost in the game
Lost the fire in her eyes for so long
How could she be so strong to survive?

CHORUS:

I admire her
She's tough enough to survive
Like the strongest woman alive
But yet, everybody judges her
They didn't learn anything from the past
For them it's nothing more then just a test
But she survived
She survived

People don't know she lived a nightmare
And we agree that wasn't fair
Wakin' up in a darkness every day
I guess there's only one way...
Which is to fight for our life
This is how we survive,
How she survived

I admire her
She's tough enough to survive
Like the strongest woman alive
But yet, everybody judges her
They didn't learn anything from the past
For them it's nothing more then just a test
But she survived
She survived

BRIDGE:

What if she gave up?
We would've lost another star
She would've been too far
When will you learn?
...
She's just like us
And that's why I admire her


I don't know, I need somebody's opinion.
Please note that I'm still studying English

Alty
Oct 26, 2012, 02:57 PM
I like it. I'd love to hear it with music. :)

FanFatale
Oct 26, 2012, 03:00 PM
I would love to have it in a balled, don't know mid-temp or slow,

Alty
Oct 26, 2012, 03:15 PM
I would love to have it in a balled, don't know mid-temp or slow,

When it comes to music I know what I like, and I know what I hate, but I can't really help you with the actual tempo, unless you want to hear it accompanied by an accordion. Yes, I play the accordion. Don't judge, my parents made me.

Either way, the lyrics I like. I'm sure you'll come up with the music, you came this far, so take the next step. If it's produced let me know, I'll buy a copy. :)