Hi class I am new and I really need help with my on line classs bad:eek: :eek:

Shonda, I have moved your post to the writing board since it seems more appropriate here. The Introductions board is to introduce yourself to the community.

With that said. This is not a class, this is a message board. We won't do the homework for you, but if you want some help, we will critique your work for you.

Shonda, I have moved your post to the writing board since it seems more appropriate here. The Introductions board is to introduce yourself to the community.

With that said. This is not a class, this is a message board. We won't do the homework for you, but if you want some help, we will critique your work for you.
How true that this is not class...

Do send in your writing and will critique the work

You need help with your writing? What about your grammar and punctuation?

There are many sites that explain "persuasive writing". Go and find an English 101 college text book and you will find "persuasive writing".

Writing Workshop Home (http://teacher.scholastic.com/activities/writing/index.asp?topic=Persuasive)

http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/Atrium/1437/pers.html

Persuasive Writing Websites (http://www.kent.k12.wa.us/curriculum/writing/elem_writing/Bib/Persuasive.htm)

Now you can get down to the business of writing.