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darien
Jun 16, 2011, 07:13 AM
"Shoot! Shoot!," the crowd yelled as Mario raced toward the goal.
Curlyben
Jun 16, 2011, 07:28 AM
Nope, missing another
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Eileen G
Jul 24, 2011, 09:04 AM
No, the comma is not necessary. "Shoot! Shoot!" the crowd yelled as Mario raced towards the goal. You could argue for putting a comma between yelled and as, but I think it reads better without it.
peacesign11
Apr 4, 2012, 05:10 PM
A Korat, a cat from Thailand, has a heart, shaped face, a silver, blue coat, and green eyes.
peacesign11
Apr 4, 2012, 05:11 PM
A Korat, a cat from Thailand, has a heart, shaped face, a silver, blue coat, and green eyes.