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msalexiis
Apr 15, 2011, 08:14 AM
John also mentioned that recipients of the report would included top delegates such as Mary Gold to various journalists.
pready
Apr 15, 2011, 08:28 AM
Included should be include because you are not supposed to change the tense from present to past tense in a sentence. If you are using present tense you should stay with present tense.
Also your sentence does not make sense. I would change it around.
Who is Mary Gold? Is she a top delegate, a recipient, or both?
Are the journalists recipients?
I would write: John also mentioned to top delegates such as Mary Gold that recipients of the report would be various journalists.
msalexiis
Apr 15, 2011, 08:30 AM
Thank you! There were a few typos in the sentence! Thanks for your help!
jadeweston
Apr 15, 2011, 09:22 AM
I'm not quite sure but maybe after delegates ?