View Full Version : How does this thesis sound? The erroneous gist people get of Revivalism
Everold
Nov 3, 2010, 05:31 PM
Fr_Chuck
Nov 3, 2010, 05:46 PM
Personally sounds like poor grammar on the title.
Wondergirl
Nov 3, 2010, 05:59 PM
That's not a thesis statement nor is it grammatical.
rosey11
Nov 3, 2010, 06:39 PM
Gdog you could have corrected it and then gave them a good one
rosey11
Nov 3, 2010, 06:40 PM
I don't know what in the world your talking about but sounds good to me
ScottGem
Nov 3, 2010, 07:14 PM
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Gdog you could have corrected it and then gave them a good one
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Wondergirl
Nov 3, 2010, 07:14 PM
Comment on Wondergirl's post
Gdog you could have corrected it and then gave them a good one
There's nothing to correct. The OP didn't even tackle his assignment correctly, and I'm certainly not going teach him about thesis statements or do his homework for him. He, like you, was supposed to learn that (and grammar) in school.