I'm just sitting here,
Letting it all go.
As I tell myself:
"I made it,"
"I'm alive, I know it,"
But I'm not though.
There's a part of me that's gone,
Never to return,
Its everything I want,
And yet I stay to watch it burn.
So Im just sitting here,
Letting the tears flood,
Thinking to myself
This is not good.
And I know that I know better,
But still I can't stop it.
There's a part of me that's gone,
Never to return.
Its everything I want,
And yet I stay to watch it burn.

Please tell me what you think.
-paige.

Anyone?

Bravo I LOVE IT I think it's a great Poem. It seems to express emotions and it surly touched me dearly. :) all smiles.