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i_can_sing
Sep 21, 2009, 05:38 AM
Can you pleeeeeeeeeeeease write a song for me! I love singing and I can do it really well, I want to try to make a cd but I just cannot write songs. Please don't give me songs that have already been written and sung by famous singers:)
I want a song about: Everyone is unique
Not rock, I'm more of soft singer
If, with a lot of luck, I actually get to publish a c.d -It can possibly take like... I don't know a year or somethin'- The amazing person that helped me will get the biggest mention I can possibly get for you, this is only if you want it! If you don't then I am completely fine with that.:D
Thank you! This means soooooooooooooo much to me!
Clough
Sep 21, 2009, 01:41 PM
Hi, i_can_sing!
How about writing a song together with someone here? I'm sure that you can come up with ideas! I can help you with that!
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 22, 2009, 12:55 AM
That would be great! I really would appreciate that!
Clough
Sep 23, 2009, 12:36 PM
Hi again, i_can_sing!
So, let's get started on that! Doing so could help you to feel better about yourself! I've read some of your other posts...
What are some of the things that you really like to do, please?
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 12:41 AM
I love playing Hockey, I'm a goaly. I love writing. I also love to help people when they are feeling down. I love writing. I like walking. I love standing in the rain for no reason what so ever (lol!) and that's all
:)
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 12:51 AM
So, what are some of the topics concerning about which you like to write, please?
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 12:54 AM
Sadness. Joy. Laughter. Fun. Learning to forgive and forget. Getting over something. Feeling sorry for those who bully because maybe they have problems too.
That good?
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 01:00 AM
Any of those subjects can be good, i_can_sing!
Which one might you choose if you only had one to choose, please?
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 01:01 AM
Fun, most likely. I love having fun, it's what being a kid is all about, right.
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 01:04 AM
Well, yes. Fun is part of what being a kid is about. Learning how to work, love and live with others is also a big part of growing up.
So, fun it is...
What would you like to title your song, please? Don't have to come up with it right now, but if you have an idea, that would be good!
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 01:06 AM
I was thinking,
The fire within
Sounds kind of silly I know. But I just... really like it I guess
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 01:12 AM
I think that "The Fire Within" sounds like a great title!
So, what kind of fire are we talking about here, please?
Guts, courage, conviction, willing to move on, practicing what you might preach to others, able to leap over tall buildings with a single bound, faster than a speeding train... :)
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 01:14 AM
Courage :)
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 01:21 AM
Here's a possible start for your song. We can always change things...
The Fire Within
I have courage and I have strength
Am able to go for things I like
Sometimes I feel that I can't continue on...
What do you think, please?
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 01:23 AM
I love it! It is really cool and sounds real nice :)
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 01:25 AM
How about you give some words and sentences that might also be meaningful? Don't have to be perfect. Okay to mess up. Can always change things.
Just write what's in your heart...
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 01:29 AM
And I'm going to move on,
No matter what they say,
Because words won't bring me down no more
I'm going my own way...
?? Like it??
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 01:30 AM
I have courage and I have strength
Am able to go for things I like
Sometimes I feel that I can't continue on...
But I'm going to move on
Through the good times and the bad
NO matter what the say
I will stay strong,
No I won't back down
No words can bring me down, no the won't bring me down today.
Or maybe even this?? My friend is helping me :)
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 01:31 AM
Please give me a minute to re-work it. Yes, I do like what you've written...
Please just pour your heart and soul out. It's okay!
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 01:34 AM
Yep, sure will. I will write more when I can think of something :)
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 01:35 AM
I have courage and I have strength
Am able to go for things I like
Sometimes I feel that I can't continue on...
But I'm going to be movin' on...
Through the good times and the bad
NO matter what they say...
I will stay strong, and I won't be backin' down
No words will bring me down,
No, they won't bring me down today.
Opinion, please?
It's developing...
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 01:37 AM
' cause I'm headin' my own way
Don't try to stop me, you don't caare
You never were and will never be there
But still I will try to move on
So I can live life, happy all along...
?? I don't know. That was just the first thing that came to my head.
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 01:40 AM
Okay, please give me a couple of minutes.
Need to make things work with some kind of rhythm and meter.
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 01:46 AM
I have courage and I have strength
Am able to go for things I like
Sometimes I feel that I can't continue on...
But I'm going to be movin' on...
Through the good times and the bad
NO matter what they say...
I will stay strong, and I won't be backin' down
No words will bring me down,
No, they won't bring me down today.
I'm headin' my own way
Nothing's going to stop me
...
I'm having trouble with the "you don't care" part. What is the significance to that, please?
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 01:52 AM
Well this guy cheated on me. I knew dating him was a stupid mistake, but I loved him. And I really want to forgive him, but the more I think about it I realise that he never really cared for me in the 1st place
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 01:54 AM
If you know that he never really cared for you, then you move on and leave the past as being the past.
Correct?
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 01:55 AM
Yer, That's what I mean by the: But still I will try to move on :)
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 02:02 AM
You can move on, and you will! You already know how to do that!
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 02:03 AM
Sure do :) I have anyhoo :)
Thanks!
p.s: Im still thinking about some lyrics
p.s.s: Thank you so so very much
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 02:07 AM
I have courage and I have strength
Am able to go for things I like
Sometimes I feel that I can't continue on...
But I'm going to be movin' on...
Through the good times and the bad
NO matter what they say...
I will stay strong, and I won't be backin' down
No words will bring me down,
No, they won't bring me down today.
I'm headin' my own way
Nothing's going to stop me
Even if you don't care I will go on...
My life will be happy from now on!
I know that I'll have hurdles to overcome
And problems to face...
But, I know that I'll be able to face them,
And, face them with the courage
And the strength that I have.
Opinion?
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 02:09 AM
The lyrics can be changed and developed. It can be quite an involved process...
You're very welcome and I enjoy working with you!
Thanks! :)
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 02:11 AM
Wow WOW WOW WOW! I absolutely love it You are so amazing!
Thanks heaps!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 02:13 AM
What time is it where you're located, i_can_sing?
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 02:15 AM
5:14 pm
Why may I ask?
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 02:19 AM
It's about 4:18 A.M. where I am!
I'm fading fast and do need to go! I appreciate your understanding and look forward to working with you at some point in the near future!
Am house and dog sitting right now for some friends. Need to move out, late tomorrow night. Probably will be on again at similar times tomorrow night.
Please, just don't give up on anything...
Okay?
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 02:35 AM
I hope that I didn't "scare" you away, i_can_sing! But, I do need to get to bed!
Thanks!
i_can_sing
Sep 24, 2009, 02:36 AM
Haha :) No you didn't
Sleep tight
Thanks!
Clough
Sep 24, 2009, 02:38 AM
Thanks!
That was nice!
Talk to you later... :)