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paigerwaiger94
Jul 22, 2009, 01:17 PM
I cannot make him mine.


I cannot seem to make him mine.
Though I try so hard sometimes.
Another lonely night,
Is spent here without him.
Tears fall with the first light,
Because I cannot make him mine.


I cannot seem to make him mine.
Though I try so hard sometimes.
Another lonely night,
Is spent here in his arms.
Sadness comes with first light,
Because I cannot make him mine.


I cannot seem to make him mine,
So I have stopped trying, for quite some time.
Just another night,
Is spent here with out him.
Understanding comes with first light,
I know he loves you... and not me.
I cannot make him mine.

joyluo1999
Jul 22, 2009, 01:48 PM
That's a great poem!
I loved it.:):D:)

I loved your other poem as well.
Poetry should be your job.

Good Luck on any other poems you're going to write.

Joy

paigerwaiger94
Jul 22, 2009, 01:59 PM
Aw! Thank you so much!