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bladerecon
May 11, 2009, 01:58 AM
When I think of you, I wonder how you’re doing
When I hear you, I become speechless
When I see you, my heart starts beating
When I touch you, I can’t stop
When I kiss you, I want more

We argue like were married
We spend time together like we’ve known each other forever
We make up like nothing ever happened
We hold each other like that’s all we have


I want it to be at least three stanzas long but this is all I have. If someone can get me someone can give me some ideas to finish this off it would be greatly appreciated.

Clough
May 11, 2009, 02:06 AM
Hi, bladerecon!

I can help you with this and also show you how it might be set to music, if you're interested.

Please let me know.

Thanks!

redhed35
May 11, 2009, 03:21 PM
I dreamed you,
I wished you,
I longed for you,

My love, my hope,
My heart-
I love you.


Holding you there is no other,
You captured me,yet I am free,
Your scent lingers on me,
I feel you,I see you,I hear you,
In me,around me,above me below me,
I love you I love you I love you.

Clough
May 11, 2009, 11:08 PM
Okay, I received your private message, bladerecon indicating that you are interested in what I'm offering to help you to do.

Please let me know what you would like to do. This sort of writing would be much more appropriate if put in the Writing forum topic area. That's one of the areas that I moderate, and if something goes "Oops!", then I can fix it.

Thanks!