I am out of work and I want to take this opportunity to get my education. In this day and time you need both parties working in the household to make it. Right now we are barely surviving on his pay alone. I am seeking an online degree from CTU, because I am so tired of the endless dead-end jobs that take me nowhere. I know with my degree I can get a decent paying job so I can better support my family. I want to be someone that is proud of their job. I want my son and my husband to be proud of me for bettering myself. . I also want to take some of the stress of my husband who has been supporting me for the last two years
I used the internet to look up every possible choice. I found that CTU was the best choice for me. It is highly accredited and the admissions advisors are very helpful. I can look after my son and get a great education with CTU. It has been five years since finishing my online degree. My life has been wonderful and extremely fulfilling. I have rewarding job at a local doctor’s office. I am working on getting my Bachelor’s in Health Care Management and getting great grades. My husband and I own our own home now. We are so happy to have financial freedom and our privacy back.
Five years ago, I was living with my parents; my husband was the only party bringing in money. I decided that I had to make a change, but I knew I needed to be home with my son also. I enrolled for classes at CTU online. It gave me the opportunity that a traditional college did not. It gave me the opportunity to learn and be there for my family. I was worried at first that I would not get back into the swing of things; other things that worried me were; that I am not smart enough, suffering from another stroke and losing the support from my family. I soon found that I was getting great grades. My family and friends supported me for the most part by watching my son while I studied or when I had to finish an important assignment. Some had worries that I would get stressed out or I would not have enough time for my family. I soon proved them wrong by handling all my responsibilities with no issues.
I accomplished passing all my classes and receiving my degree which led me to getting an online job and later a job at a doctor’s office.
The past five years has been a rollercoaster ride, but I would not change a thing. All the trials and tribulations have brought me to where I am today and the person that I have become. I am so proud of myself and so are my friends and family. I would not have it any other way.
For my vision to become a reality I need to first finish my degree, get a decent paying job and get out of my parents house. To accomplish this I will work diligently. I know for starters I will not have to worry about child care when I get a job. I plan on working from home until my son goes to school full time. My husband’s check pays for all the bills, so I will save my money up for a house and to pursue my Bachelor’s. I need to make sure only necessary money is spent and save the rest.
It is necessary to plan ahead for any technical issue that may come up while pursuing my degree online. The problems that I foresee are; my son getting a hold of my computer, my computer will crash from contracting a virus, or I could lose an important document.
This is what I plan on doing to combat these issues, I will always put my computer out of my son’s reach, I will make sure my computer is equipped with the latest virus software, and to always back up my assignment on disk or send my documents in an email to myself
The people in my support system play an important part of getting tasks done on time and to study. My husband is my rock, he watches Matthew while I attend my live chats and finish up assignments. Robin, Matthew’s godmother, takes him off my hands for a night so I have time to unwind. My mom sometimes plays with Matthew so I can take a much needed nap so I can function. Without them I would be a zombie or ready to tear my hair out. All these things are important for me to finish my degree and get that rewarding job that I want; which in turn will finally get me out of my parent’s house. If I did not have family and friends to help I know I would not be able to achieve my goals.
My reward system is something I have had to put a lot of thought into. I will reward myself with sushi if I pass this class. Upon completing my next semester of classes I will reward myself with a spa day. To jump ahead some, when I graduate college I want to go to the beach for the weekend. When I get a job I want to reward myself with a car, it has been so long since I had a car of my own. To reward myself for getting my new home I want to buy a pool.
The goal that I worry about the most at this time is finishing my Associate’s. My family and friends will all pitch in with anything I need from watching my child to critiquing a paper. I plan to make time for my family and friends by calling them on night when I cannot get out and making sure I set aside time a couple times a month to go visiting. At home I am always up early so I can complete all household chores, so it will not be a burden to my family to have to pick up my chores while I attend school. I plan on looking at my plan every couple of months to make sure I am following and stay on track. I feel this is important for me so I don’t lose sight of what is important.
If I follow through with my plan I am sure I will have a happy and fulfilling life. My family is all the support I need to achieve my goals; they have always stood by me through thick and thin. I want the satisfaction of finishing school and achieving all my goals so I will not quit. My drive is my family being proud of me for finishing my degree and making my life more successful by getting a great job, moving out of my parents and to have the money to get my Bachelor’s degree, which in turn will get me an even better job.

Hi, nitelight198073!

Just for clarification, is what you wrote above what you wanted me to look over and review?

Thanks!

Yeah... I am sorry slightly absent minded

I did receive your private messages. You can correct the spelling of my name by going advanced. I would appreciate that. I can't do that in this forum topic area, because it's not one of the ones that I moderate.

What is this assignment for and what were the exact instructions that you were given to complete it, please?

Thanks!

Well is a combination of different mini assinments through out my classPersonal Action Plan Steps 5, 6 & 7: (complete final draft)

Where do you see yourself in 5 years? How will you get there? What roadblocks will you need to overcome? Who will help and support you along your journey?

Throughout this course you have learned how to be a successful student. Successful students have a vision and a plan to reach their goals. For your final task, you will create a Personal Action Plan using what you have completed throughout this course. To complete this task, you will take Steps 1-4 from your previous submissions and add Steps 5, 6 & 7 to create one cohesive document. When it is finished, you can utilize it in future courses for a handy reference, and examine and update it throughout your program.

Steps already completed:

Step 1 - The Need or Desire for Change (P1DB)

Step 2 - Your Vision (P2IP)

Step 3 - Goal Setting (P2DB2)

Step 4 - Technology Plan (P2DB2)

Steps still needing to be completed:

Step 5 - Gathering Support


Examine each of the goals you listed in Step 3 (Goal Setting). Think creatively about how your family, friends, colleagues, and other individuals might help you accomplish each goal. Discuss possible support and strategies that will help you reach each goal.

For example, if childcare is a concern, list individuals who might be able to assist in watching your children. Can you count on them during certain times in exchange for you helping them at others? Can you work out a schedule with your partner, relatives, neighbors, etc. so that your children are cared for while you are able to attend class or have study time?

Step 6 – Rewarding Yourself

It is important to give yourself credit for your hard work. Come up with a system to reward yourself for successful progress toward achieving your short-term and long-term goals. Be specific; it is okay to have different rewards for different goals.

Step 7 - Finalizing Your Plan

Look at the goals and support options you discussed in Steps 3 and 5.
Indicate and explain which goals and support you will pursue at this time. This is a good time to talk with your family and others with whom you live and work. Be certain to be clear about your needs.
Going back to school will change your routine and your relationships. This does not have to be a negative change. Time spent in planning now can help you to avoid roadblocks to your future success.
It is important to periodically review and revise your plan throughout your degree program. You can use it as a handy reference when needed.
Discuss when you plan on reviewing your Personal Action Plan.
When you have completed these steps, write a final paragraph that summarizes your thoughts and concludes your plan.


Please submit your assignment. (3-5 pages + title page).

I hope this helps

Okay, I think that I get what you're trying to do here. When is it due, please?

On the 11th

So, we do have some time here. I'm having some difficulties at my home with my electricity and am living for the time being with friends. So, I'm not using my own computer. I also need to go soon in order to practice at the church where I just got the job as their organist/pianist.

Is what you wrote meant to be a response to all of the steps that you've outlined or just for some of them? If only for some of them, which ones, please?

Thanks!

It was suppose to be all of them I have to ask my professor if it has to be in the order 1-7 because to me it doesn't flow well

I am sorry to hear about yout issue hopefully it is not too serious

It's not that bad. At least I have friends that I can stay with.

I am glad to hear that

It was suppose to be all of them i have to ask my professor if it has to be in the order 1-7 because to me it doesnt flow well

One thing that we need to do is to separate the paragraphs so that things are easier to read. I would think that addressing each issue in order like you have written them and make corrections to make it the best that it can be.

Thanks!

One thing that we need to do is to separate the paragraphs so that things are easier to read. I would think that addressing each issue in order like you have written them and make corrections to make it the best that it can be.

Thanks!good so it is useable... I am all right with a couple of paragraphs but when it turns into a couple of pages I am lost lol

Is what is quoted below, the first thing that you were to address?


Step 1 - The Need or Desire for Change (P1DB)

Thanks!

Yes

Then, let's work on that first.

OK

Quoted below, is your first paragraph.


I am out of work and I want to take this opportunity to get my education. In this day and time you need both parties working in the household to make it. Right now we are barely surviving on his pay alone. I am seeking an online degree from CTU, because I am so tired of the endless dead-end jobs that take me nowhere. I know with my degree I can get a decent paying job so I can better support my family. I want to be someone that is proud of their job. I want my son and my husband to be proud of me for bettering myself. . I also want to take some of the stress of my husband who has been supporting me for the last two years

Suggestion: I would suggest titleling it like this, My Need and Desire to Change. You will appear more organized that way.

I am working on a revision of your paragraph.

Ok I get it

I am out of work and I want to take this opportunity to get my education. In this day and time you need both parties working in the household to make it. Right now we are barely surviving on his pay alone. I am seeking an online degree from CTU, because I am so tired of the endless dead-end jobs that take me nowhere. I know with my degree I can get a decent paying job so I can better support my family. I want to be someone that is proud of their job. I want my son and my husband to be proud of me for bettering myself. . I also want to take some of the stress of my husband who has been supporting me for the last two years.

Possible revision is below...

I want and need to change my life for the betterment of myself and family. I am out of work and working to educate myself. In this day and time, people need both person's in a relationship working together to make ends meet. Right now, we are barely surviving on my husband's pay alone.

I am seeking an online degree fromm CTU, because I'm so tired of the endless dead-end jobs that lead me to nowhere.

I know, that with my degree that I will obtain, I can get a decent paying job co that I can be able to better support my family.

I want to be some who is proud of their job and realizing their own worth as a person. My desire is for my husband to be proud of me for my attempts at bettering myself. I would also like to take some of the stress off my husband who has been supporting our family finantially over the past two years.

What do you think of the revision?

Thanks!

Quoted below, is your first paragraph.



Suggestion: I would suggest titleling it like this, My Need and Desire to Change. You will appear more organized that way.

I am working on a revision of your paragraph.
Sticking my nose in where it may not belong... I got confused reading her essay, not being sure of the order of events. Maybe adding headings will unconfuse me.

What do you think of the revision?
There are still mistakes in grammar. Do you want my corrections, or should I go back to reading my novel?

That sounds better than what I had I think I need to buy a thesaurus

There are still mistakes in grammar. Do you want my corrections, or should I go back to reading my novel?any help is appreciated... I was confused on the flow of my paper.. it did not make sense to me but I had all the info in it and Clough is such a peacj he has been helping me

There are still mistakes in grammar. Do you want my corrections, or should I go back to reading my novel?

Your corrections in grammar would certainly be welcome! After all, you are the professional writer! I've just been a teacher of a fine arts and cultural things for many years.

Thanks!

Here are my corrections to Clough's edit (did I change it too much?):

I want and need to change my life to better me and my family. I am out of work and working to educate myself. In this day and time, both individuals in a relationship must work at paying jobs in order to make ends meet. Right now, we are barely surviving on my husband's pay alone.

I am seeking an online degree from CTU, because I'm so tired of the endless dead-end jobs that lead me nowhere. With this degree, I will be able to get a decent-paying job that will enable me to do my part in support of my family.

I want to be someone who is proud of her job and realizes her own worth as a person. I also want my husband to be proud of me for my attempts at bettering myself and want to take some of the stress off him for being our family anchor during the past two years.

No you did not change too much it is pretty much the same

I changed some phrases to simplify them and make the wording cleaner and clearer. I do want it to sound like you and not me, though. Hmmmm.

Well I am pretty simple so I think it works lol I thought I was a pretty decent writer but I think I am wrong

Your corrections in grammar would certainly be welcome! Afterall, you are the professional writer! I've just been a teacher of a fine arts and cultural things for many years.

Thanks!I am so happy you can help me I appreciate it your opinions are held high at AMHD you are awesome

Now, does what has been written address sufficiently what needed to be addressed in the first task?


Step 1 - The Need or Desire for Change (P1DB)

Yes indeed

This paragraoph does not seem to belong, especially not where you put it:

I used the internet to look up every possible choice. I found that CTU was the best choice for me. It is highly accredited and the admissions advisors are very helpful. I can look after my son and get a great education with CTU. It has been five years since finishing my online degree. My life has been wonderful and extremely fulfilling. I have rewarding job at a local doctor’s office. I am working on getting my Bachelor’s in Health Care Management and getting great grades. My husband and I own our own home now. We are so happy to have financial freedom and our privacy back.

Wondergirl;1707886]This paragraoph does not seem to belong, especially not where you put it:

Nice spelling of paragraph, Wondergirl! :D ;)

I know it don't make sense when I copied and pasted it went all kooky.

Nice spelling of paragraph, Wondergirl!! :D ;)
Oh, good! You found it and passed my test, Clough!

I was also suppose to state in my paper why I chose CTU if that helps

I was also suppose to state in my paper why i chose CTU if that helps
Why did you choose it? Name three reasons.

Maybe I can find a spot for why I picked CTU in the first paragraph

The classes fit into my schedule
It allows me to take care of my son
The advisors at CTU seem to be genuine and want to help right away

You sort of did with this paragraph (NOTE TO CLOUGH: word correctly spelled):

Five years ago, I was living with my parents; my husband was the only party bringing in money. I decided that I had to make a change, but I knew I needed to be home with my son also. I enrolled for classes at CTU online. It gave me the opportunity that a traditional college did not. It gave me the opportunity to learn and be there for my family. I was worried at first that I would not get back into the swing of things; other things that worried me were; that I am not smart enough, suffering from another stroke and losing the support from my family. I soon found that I was getting great grades. My family and friends supported me for the most part by watching my son while I studied or when I had to finish an important assignment. Some had worries that I would get stressed out or I would not have enough time for my family. I soon proved them wrong by handling all my responsibilities with no issues.

Is it okay if you label your explanations/answers?

Thanks!

I believe so

You sort of did with this paragraph (NOTE TO CLOUGH: word correctly spelled):

Five years ago, I was living with my parents; my husband was the only party bringing in money. I decided that I had to make a change, but I knew I needed to be home with my son also. I enrolled for classes at CTU online. It gave me the opportunity that a traditional college did not. It gave me the opportunity to learn and be there for my family. I was worried at first that I would not get back into the swing of things; other things that worried me were; that I am not smart enough, suffering from another stroke and losing the support from my family. I soon found that I was getting great grades. My family and friends supported me for the most part by watching my son while I studied or when I had to finish an important assignment. Some had worries that I would get stressed out or I would not have enough time for my family. I soon proved them wrong by handling all my responsibilities with no issues.yeah I see that

You sort of did with this paragraph (NOTE TO CLOUGH: word correctly spelled):

Five years ago, I was living with my parents; my husband was the only party bringing in money. I decided that I had to make a change, but I knew I needed to be home with my son also. I enrolled for classes at CTU online. It gave me the opportunity that a traditional college did not. It gave me the opportunity to learn and be there for my family. I was worried at first that I would not get back into the swing of things; other things that worried me were; that I am not smart enough, suffering from another stroke and losing the support from my family. I soon found that I was getting great grades. My family and friends supported me for the most part by watching my son while I studied or when I had to finish an important assignment. Some had worries that I would get stressed out or I would not have enough time for my family. I soon proved them wrong by handling all my responsibilities with no issues.
And to clear up I also have a part where I have to imagine my life five years from now so that is why this paragraph is here

I'm going to have to go, kids. Need to get ready to play for church tomorrow. Am staying at friends for the time being, as I've mentioned previously. Need to get an outfit, music and check on my cat.

We do have time to work on this. I will return later tonight and on other nights.

Thanks!

I'm gonna have to go, kids. Need to get ready to play for church tomorrow. Am staying at friends for the time being, as I've mentioned previously. Need to get an outfit, music and check on my cat.

We do have time to work on this. I will return later tonight and on other nights.

Thanks!
Thank you so much and take care

That five-years-from-now imagining paragraph is in the wrong place. Correct?

I is in the section my vision

I am talking to my professor tomorrow evening and I will ask if it has to be in order 1-7 and if it is all right to put titles at the beginning of each paragraph

Then you will have to be clearer that it is a vision and not reality. That is the part that confused me since it sounds like it has happened already.

Ok will do it is getting late for me and my son gets up early thanks bunches for your help goodnight and take care hope to talk to you soon

Sleep well - see you on Sunday!

This is my vision for the future it is five years from now and I am looking back on my journey. Maybe this is how I should start my next paragraph so it flows better

This is my vision for the future it is five years from now and I am looking back on my journey. maybe this is how i should start my next paragraph so it flows better
Yes, you need a "bridge" like that between the first section and the vision section so your readers don't get confused.

Yes, you need a "bridge" like that between the first section and the vision section so your readers don't get confused.
All right yay I got it :p

How about this --

This is my vision for the future: It is five years from now, and first I do a quick review of my journey. The Internet made it possible to learn about colleges without visiting them in person. After reading about CTU, I decided it was the best choice for me. It is highly accredited, and the admissions advisors are very helpful. I could stay home while doing online coursework and look after my small son, meanwhile getting a great education with CTU.

The past five years have been a rollercoaster ride, but I would not change a thing. All my trials and tribulations have brought me to where I am today and the person I have become. I passed all my classes and earned an online degree which first got me an online job. My life is wonderful and extremely fulfilling. I now have a rewarding job at a local doctor's office. I am working toward a Bachelor's in Health Care Management and getting great grades. My husband and I own our own home now and have our privacy back. We are so happy to finally have financial freedom! I am so proud of myself and so are my friends and family. I would not have had it any other way.

How about this --

This is my vision for the future: It is five years from now, and first I do a quick review of my journey. The Internet made it possible to learn about colleges without visiting them in person. After reading about CTU, I decided it was the best choice for me. It is highly accredited, and the admissions advisors are very helpful. I could stay home while doing online coursework and look after my small son, meanwhile getting a great education with CTU.

Five years have passed. I have earned an online degree. My life is wonderful and extremely fulfilling. I have a rewarding job at a local doctor’s office. I am working toward a Bachelor’s in Health Care Management and getting great grades. My husband and I own our own home now and have our privacy back. We are so happy to finally have financial freedom!OMG you are a wonderful writer, I boe to you I am not worthy you are great

OMG you are a wonderful writer, i boe to you i am not worthy you are great
All I did was change a few words around and changed the verb tense. Most of the words are yours.

All I did was change a few words around and changed the verb tense. Most of the words are yours.
Well maybe but you made it sound more prfessional and such.. I can't wait until I get into an english class so I can re-learn all the english I have forgotten over the years

I tweaked that section a bit more when I found another part of your essay that fits in with the vision section. Please check it again (Post #59).

OK I see now

I tweaked that section a bit more when I found another part of your essay that fits in with the vision section. Please check it again (Post #59).

I think it works better than the other

For the setting goals section --

Five years ago, my husband, child, and I were living with my parents. Since my husband was the only one in our little family bringing in money, I decided I had to better myself and eventually get a job, but I knew I also needed to be home with our little son. I would enroll for classes at CTU online. It would give me the opportunity that a traditional college did not, to learn and, at the same time, to be at home for my family. I was worried at first that I would not be able to get back into a school mentality. Other things that worried me were that I am not smart enough, that I would suffer from another stroke, and that I might lose the support of my extended family.

I knew, for my vision to become a reality, I needed to first finish my degree, to get a decent-paying job, and to move our little family out of my parents house. To accomplish this, I realized I would have to work diligently. In order not to worry about child care when I got a job, I would somehow work from home until my son went to school full time. My husband's check would pay all the bills, so I would save up my money for a house and to pursue a Bachelor's degree. I would need to make sure only necessary money is spent for our everyday needs and then save the rest.

We need to stick this section somewhere (it's more about accomplishing your goals) --

Once I started taking courses, I was able to get great grades. My family and friends supported me by watching my son while I studied or when I had to finish an important assignment. Some of them worried that I would get stressed out or that I would't have enough time for my family. I soon proved them wrong by handling all my responsibilities with no problem.

We need to stick this section somewhere (it's more about accomplishing your goals) --

Once I started taking courses, I was able to get great grades. My family and friends supported me by watching my son while I studied or when I had to finish an important assignment. Some of them worried that I would get stressed out or tht I would't have enough time for my family. I soon proved them wrong by handling all my responsibilities with no problem.yeah

Let me read through and check where I can put it

I don't know I think I should put it after making my vision a reality second paragraph

I dunno i think i should put it after making my vision a reality second paragraph
But you have a vision section, then goals. We can't do reality yet. Is there a final section about what happened in the end, how your vision and goals worked out?

What are Steps 6 and 7?

Step 5 - Gathering Support


Examine each of the goals you listed in Step 3 (Goal Setting). Think creatively about how your family, friends, colleagues, and other individuals might help you accomplish each goal. Discuss possible support and strategies that will help you reach each goal.

For example, if childcare is a concern, list individuals who might be able to assist in watching your children. Can you count on them during certain times in exchange for you helping them at others? Can you work out a schedule with your partner, relatives, neighbors, etc. so that your children are cared for while you are able to attend class or have study time?

Step 6 – Rewarding Yourself

It is important to give yourself credit for your hard work. Come up with a system to reward yourself for successful progress toward achieving your short-term and long-term goals. Be specific; it is okay to have different rewards for different goals.

Step 7 - Finalizing Your Plan

Look at the goals and support options you discussed in Steps 3 and 5.
Indicate and explain which goals and support you will pursue at this time. This is a good time to talk with your family and others with whom you live and work. Be certain to be clear about your needs.
Going back to school will change your routine and your relationships. This does not have to be a negative change. Time spent in planning now can help you to avoid roadblocks to your future success.
It is important to periodically review and revise your plan throughout your degree program. You can use it as a handy reference when needed.
Discuss when you plan on reviewing your Personal Action Plan.
When you have completed these steps, write a final paragraph that summarizes your thoughts and concludes your plan.

What about putting it under Support by changing the verb tense (and I added another paragraph that seems to fit)?

Once I start taking courses, I want to be able to get great grades. The people in my support system will play an important part in my getting tasks done on time and in my setting aside time to study. My husband, who is my rock, will watch Matthew while I attend the live chats and finish up assignments. Robin, Matthew's godmother, will take him now and then for a night, so I have time to myself to unwind. My mom will play with Matthew during the daytime, so I will be able to take a much-needed nap. My family and friends will support me by watching my son while I study or when I have to finish an important assignment. Some of them will worry that I will get stressed out or that I won't have enough time for my family. I know I will be able to, with their love and support, handle all my responsibilities with no problem. If I did not have family and friends to help, I know I would not be able to achieve my goals.

What about putting it under Support by changing the verb tense?

Once I start taking courses, I want to be able to get great grades. My family and friends will support me by watching my son while I study or when I have to finish an important assignment. Some of them will worry that I will get stressed out or that I won't have enough time for my family. I know I will be able to, with their love and support, handle all my responsibilities with no problem.you know that will do good thinking

you know that will do good thinking
I added more from your original essay. Check Post #74.

Let's review how we're doing --

Step 1 - The Need or Desire for Change (P1DB)

Step 2 - Your Vision (P2IP)

Step 3 - Goal Setting (P2DB2)

Step 4 - Technology Plan (P2DB2)

Step 5 - Gathering Support

Step 6 – Rewarding Yourself

Step 7 - Finalizing Your Plan

Personal Action Plan

Step 1 – The Need or Desire for Change (Introduction)

1) Begin by discussing the reasons you are seeking your degree from CTU.
2) To help you with your discussion, refer back to your entrance essay and think about the following questions:
a) What is happening that makes a degree desirable or necessary?
b) Why did you choose CTU?
c) Why are you choosing to return to school now?

Step 2 – Your Vision

1) Think about what you'd like your life to look like 5 years from now, personally and professionally.
2) Describe this scenario by using what you wrote in your PowerPoint presentation from the Phase 2 IP. Imagine it is 5 years from now and that the “Future You” is talking to the “Present You”.
a) You might want to use an opening sentence like “Five years have passed since I started my degree program... ” or something that indicates that you are looking ahead and writing how you plan for your life to be five years from now.
b) Describe what your life consists of and how it is different by addressing the following questions:
I) What were you doing 5 years ago? (e.g. you were beginning your degree program, etc.)
ii) Describe your life (e.g. family situation, where you are living, etc.)
iii) What are you doing? (e.g. your career, pursuing another degree, etc.)
iv) What are your accomplishments?
v) How do you feel about the past five years?
vi) What have been the reactions of your family and friends?
vii) Identify three possible beliefs or thoughts that you hold about yourself that may be limiting you from reaching your full potential.

Step 3 – Goal Setting

1) Discuss the goals that need to be accomplished in order for your vision to become a reality.
2) Your discussion should include long-term goals (e.g. finish my degree) and more immediate concerns/short-term goals (e.g. childcare while I attend class).
3) Try to be specific and discuss everything for which you need to plan
4) Be sure to include strategies that will assist you to reach these goals





Step 4 – Technology Plan

In this program you will be required to complete all of your tasks using your computer. When technological errors/issues occur, you need a plan for how you will get your work done and your tasks turned in by the due dates. How will you gather support at these times?
1) Write about all of your potential technology challenges.
a) For example, losing your tasks you thought you had saved.
2) Discuss how you will overcome these technology challenges.
a) For example, backing everything up on an external hard drive.

Step 5 – Gathering Support

Examine each of the goals you listed in Step 3 (Goal Setting). Think creatively about how your family, friends, colleagues, and other individuals might help you accomplish each goal. Discuss possible support and strategies that will help you reach each goal.

For example, if childcare is a concern, list individuals who might be able to assist in watching your children. Can you count on them during certain times in exchange for you helping them at others? Can you work out a schedule with your partner, relatives, neighbors, etc. so that your children are cared for while you are able to attend class or have study time?

Step 6 – Rewarding Yourself

It is important to give yourself credit for your hard work. Come up with a system to reward yourself for successful progress toward achieving your short-term and long-term goals. Be specific; it is okay to have different rewards for different goals.

Step 7 – Finalizing Your Plan

Look at the goals and support options you discussed in Steps 3 and 5.
1) Indicate and explain which goals and support you will pursue at this time. This is a good time to talk with your family and others with whom you live and work. Be certain to be clear about your needs.
-Going back to school will change your routine and your relationships. This does not have to be negative change. Time spent in planning now can help you to avoid roadblocks to your future success.

2) It is important to periodically review and revise your plan throughout your degree program. You can use it as a handy reference when needed.
a) Discuss when you plan on reviewing your Personal Action Plan.

Conclusion – Write a final paragraph that summarizes your thoughts and concludes your plan.

What about putting it under Support by changing the verb tense (and I added another paragraph that seems to fit)?

Once I start taking courses, I want to be able to get great grades. The people in my support system will play an important part in my getting tasks done on time and in my setting aside time to study. My husband, who is my rock, will watch Matthew while I attend the live chats and finish up assignments. Robin, Matthew's godmother, will take him now and then for a night, so I have time to myself to unwind. My mom will play with Matthew during the daytime, so I will be able to take a much-needed nap. My family and friends will support me by watching my son while I study or when I have to finish an important assignment. Some of them will worry that I will get stressed out or that I won't have enough time for my family. I know I will be able to, with their love and support, handle all my responsibilities with no problem. If I did not have family and friends to help, I know I would not be able to achieve my goals.I don't know I don't think the tense fits I am suppose to explain it like in present tense I also posted a complete out line I just got

I dunno i dont think the tense fits i am suppose to explain it like in present tense i also posted a complete out line i just got
Present tense? Hmmm. Easy to fix. Sorry I got waylaid. My mom called from NY state.

I dunno i dont think the tense fits i am suppose to explain it like in present tense i also posted a complete out line i just got
How about this --

Now that I am taking courses, I'm excited to be getting great grades. The people in my support system play an important part in my getting tasks done on time and in my setting aside time to study. My husband, who is my rock, watches Matthew while I attend the live chats and finish up assignments. Robin, Matthew's godmother, takes him now and then for a night, so I have time to myself to unwind. My mom plays with Matthew during the daytime, so I am able to take much-needed naps. My family and friends support me by watching my son while I study or when I have to finish an important assignment. Some of them worry that I will get stressed out or that I won't have enough time for my family. I know I am okay and, with their love and support, can handle all my responsibilities with no problem. If I did not have family and friends to help, I know I could not achieve my goals.

That works a lot better thank you

I will be back on later I have to fix dinner

Hi dinner is over children are in beds yay

I'm here. What's next?

Lets see we have steps one through five covered

Now I have to do rewards system and conclusion with an explanation of when I will return to view my plan

What about this paragraph? Where does it fit?

It is necessary to plan ahead for any technical issue that may come up while pursuing my degree online. The problems that I foresee are; my son getting a hold of my computer, my computer will crash from contracting a virus, or I could lose an important document.

Reward section --

My reward system is something I have had to put a lot of thought into. For instance, I will reward myself with sushi if I pass such-and-such class. Upon completing my next semester of classes, I will reward myself with a spa day. To jump ahead some, when I graduate from college, I will reward myself by going to the beach for the weekend. When I get a job, I will reward myself with a car. To reward us for getting our new home, I will buy a pool.

Crap I forgot about forseeing techinical issues that is where it comes in I am sorry I am so scatter-brained

Ever since my stroke I haven't had a great memory I have to be constantly reminded of things it is rather embarrassing

Ever since my stroke I havent had a great memory I have to be constantly reminded of things it is rather embarrassing
Is the technology section long enough?

What about this paragraph? Where does it fit?

It is necessary to plan ahead for any technical issue that may come up while pursuing my degree online. The problems that I foresee are; my son getting a hold of my computer, my computer will crash from contracting a virus, or I could lose an important document.

Reward section --

My reward system is something I have had to put a lot of thought into. For instance, I will reward myself with sushi if I pass such-and-such class. Upon completing my next semester of classes, I will reward myself with a spa day. To jump ahead some, when I graduate from college, I will reward myself by going to the beach for the weekend. When I get a job, I will reward myself with a car. To reward us for getting our new home, I will buy a pool.the reward section works well

It is necessary to plan ahead for any technical issue that may come up while pursuing my degree online. The problems that I foresee are; my son getting a hold of my computer, my computer will crash from contracting a virus, or I could lose an important document.
This is what I plan on doing to combat these issues, I will always put my computer out of my son's reach, I will make sure my computer is equipped with the latest virus software, and to always back up my assignment on disk or send my documents in an email to myself a paragraph is 3-5 sentences right

I think it is long enough

How about --

It is necessary to plan ahead for any technical issue that may come up while pursuing my degree online. The problems that I foresee are: my son getting ahold of my computer, my computer crashing from contracting a virus, and losing an important document. In order to combat these issues, I will always put my computer out of my son’s reach, I will make sure my computer is equipped with the latest virus software, and I will always back up my assignments on disk or send documents in an e-mail to myself.

Wow that is great... only if I can home in on my writing abilities like you... I will work on it

wow that is great...only if i can hone in on my writing abilities like you...i will work on it
I deleted a few phrases that said nothing, but didn't do much else. Most of it is yours.

I worked with three heartless editors who ripped up my sentences before their companies published my writings. Been there, done that.

I deleted a few phrases that said nothing, but didn't do much else. Most of it is yours.

I worked with three heartless editors who ripped up my sentences before their companies published my writings. Been there, done that.lol OMG I couldn't imagine what kind of books do you write... I knoe I am off subject just curious

lol OMG i couldnt imagine what kind of books do you write...i knoe i am off subject just curious
One long article for the Chicago Historical Society about the Auditorium Building, three books on Texas history and one on Illinois history (mostly bought by schools for their state history curricula), and one short story for a autism magazine about an autistic young man. I have on the back burner (still thinking about and writing) a romance for older women and several children's books.

One long article for the Chicago Historical Society about the Auditorium Building, three books on Texas history and one on Illinois history (mostly bought by schools for their state history curricula), and one short story for a autism magazine about an autistic young man. I have on the back burner (still thinking about and writing) a romance for older women and several children's books.Wow I am interested in the one about the autistic young man my six year old step son is autistic

Let's finish this first, and then I will send you my story.

OK we are almost there

How's this --

The goal that I worry about the most is finishing my Associate's. My family and friends will all pitch in with anything I need, from watching my child to critiquing a paper. I plan to make time for my family and friends by calling them on nights when I cannot get out and making sure I set aside a couple of times a month to go visiting. At home I am always up early, so I can complete all household chores, and save my family from having to do my chores while I attend school. I plan to look at my plan every couple of months to make sure I am following it and staying on track. I don't want to lose sight of all the little, everyday details while tackling the most important tasks in my plan.

If I follow through with my plan, I will have a happy and fulfilling life. My family is all the support I need to achieve my goals; they have always stood by me through thick and thin. I want the satisfaction of finishing school and achieving all my goals. I will not quit. What drives me is my family being proud of me for finishing my degree and making my life more successful by getting a great job, moving out of my parents' house, and having the tuition money to get my Bachelor's degree, which, in turn, will get me an even better job.

That is excellent thank you, you have been such a great help... thank you for giving me your valuable time

that is excellent thank you, you have been such a great help...thank you for giving me your valuable time
90%+ of it is yours. Now put it all together.

Great I will

Do you want to see it all together

do you want to see it all together
Maybe that's a good idea. I think there would be room here to post it in one hunk.

OK here goes

I want and need to change my life to better me and my family. I am out of work and working to educate myself. In this day and time, both individuals in a relationship must work at paying jobs in order to make ends meet. Right now, we are barely surviving on my husband's pay alone.
I am seeking an online degree from CTU, because I'm so tired of the endless dead-end jobs that lead me nowhere. With this degree, I will be able to get a decent-paying job that will enable me to do my part in support of my family.
I want to be someone who is proud of her job and realizes her own worth as a person. I also want my husband to be proud of me for my attempts at bettering myself and want to take some of the stress off him for being our family anchor during the past two years
Five years ago, I was living with my parents; my husband was the only party bringing in money. I decided that I had to make a change, but I knew I needed to be home with my son also. I enrolled for classes at CTU online. It gave me the opportunity that a traditional college did not. It gave me the opportunity to learn and be there for my family. I was worried at first that I would not get back into the swing of things; other things that worried me were; that I am not smart enough, suffering from another stroke and losing the support from my family. I soon found that I was getting great grades. My family and friends supported me for the most part by watching my son while I studied or when I had to finish an important assignment. Some had worries that I would get stressed out or I would not have enough time for my family. I soon proved them wrong by handling all my responsibilities with no issues. This is my vision for the future: It is five years from now, and first I do a quick review of my journey. The Internet made it possible to learn about colleges without visiting them in person. After reading about CTU, I decided it was the best choice for me. It is highly accredited, and the admissions advisors are very helpful. I could stay home while doing online coursework and look after my small son, meanwhile getting a great education with CTU.
The past five years have been a rollercoaster ride, but I would not change a thing. All my trials and tribulations have brought me to where I am today and the person I have become. I passed all my classes and earned an online degree which first got me an online job. My life is wonderful and extremely fulfilling. I now have a rewarding job at a local doctor's office. I am working toward a Bachelor's in Health Care Management and getting great grades. My husband and I own our own home now and have our privacy back. We are so happy to finally have financial freedom! I am so proud of myself and so are my friends and family. I would not have had it any other way.
Five years ago, my husband, child, and I were living with my parents. Since my husband was the only one in our little family bringing in money, I decided I had to better myself and eventually get a job, but I knew I also needed to be home with our little son. I would enroll for classes at CTU online. It would give me the opportunity that a traditional college did not, to learn and, at the same time, to be at home for my family. I was worried at first that I would not be able to get back into a school mentality. Other things that worried me were that I am not smart enough, that I would suffer from another stroke, and that I might lose the support of my extended family.

I knew, for my vision to become a reality, I needed to first finish my degree, to get a decent-paying job, and to move our little family out of my parents house. To accomplish this, I realized I would have to work diligently. In order not to worry about child care when I got a job, I would somehow work from home until my son went to school full time. My husband's check would pay all the bills, so I would save up my money for a house and to pursue a Bachelor's degree. I would need to make sure only necessary money is spent for our everyday needs and then save the rest.
Now that I am taking courses, I'm excited to be getting great grades. The people in my support system play an important part in my getting tasks done on time and in my setting aside time to study. My husband, who is my rock, watches Matthew while I attend the live chats and finish up assignments. Robin, Matthew's godmother, takes him now and then for a night, so I have time to myself to unwind. My mom plays with Matthew during the daytime, so I am able to take much-needed naps. My family and friends support me by watching my son while I study or when I have to finish an important assignment. Some of them worry that I will get stressed out or that I won't have enough time for my family. I know I am okay and, with their love and support, can handle all my responsibilities with no problem. If I did not have family and friends to help, I know I could not achieve my goals.
It is necessary to plan ahead for any technical issue that may come up while pursuing my degree online. The problems that I foresee are: my son getting hold of my computer, my computer crashing from contracting a virus, and losing an important document. In order to combat these issues, I will always put my computer out of my son's reach, I will make sure my computer is equipped with the latest virus software, and I will always back up my assignments on disk or send documents in an e-mail to myself. The goal that I worry about the most is finishing my Associate's. My family and friends will all pitch in with anything I need, from watching my child to critiquing a paper. I plan to make time for my family and friends by calling them on nights when I cannot get out and making sure I set aside a couple of times a month to go visiting. At home I am always up early, so I can complete all household chores, and save my family from having to do my chores while I attend school. I plan to look at my plan every couple of months to make sure I am following it and staying on track. I don't want to lose sight of all the little, everyday details while tackling the most important tasks in my plan.

If I follow through with my plan, I will have a happy and fulfilling life. My family is all the support I need to achieve my goals; they have always stood by me through thick and thin. I want the satisfaction of finishing school and achieving all my goals. I will not quit. What drives me is my family being proud of me for finishing my degree and making my life more successful by getting a great job, moving out of my parents' house, and having the tuition money to get my Bachelor's degree, which, in turn, will get me an even better job.



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I added a few line spaces for clarity. Check with your instructor about headings? And do you need topic sentences for each new section?

I want and need to change my life to better me and my family. I am out of work and working to educate myself. In this day and time, both individuals in a relationship must work at paying jobs in order to make ends meet. Right now, we are barely surviving on my husband's pay alone. I am seeking an online degree from CTU, because I'm so tired of the endless dead-end jobs that lead me nowhere. With this degree, I will be able to get a decent-paying job that will enable me to do my part in support of my family. I want to be someone who is proud of her job and realizes her own worth as a person. I also want my husband to be proud of me for my attempts at bettering myself and want to take some of the stress off him for being our family anchor during the past two years

Five years ago, I was living with my parents; my husband was the only party bringing in money. I decided that I had to make a change, but I knew I needed to be home with my son also. I enrolled for classes at CTU online. It gave me the opportunity that a traditional college did not. It gave me the opportunity to learn and be there for my family.

I was worried at first that I would not get back into the swing of things; other things that worried me were; that I am not smart enough, suffering from another stroke and losing the support from my family. I soon found that I was getting great grades. My family and friends supported me for the most part by watching my son while I studied or when I had to finish an important assignment. Some had worries that I would get stressed out or I would not have enough time for my family. I soon proved them wrong by handling all my responsibilities with no issues.

This is my vision for the future: It is five years from now, and first I do a quick review of my journey. The Internet made it possible to learn about colleges without visiting them in person. After reading about CTU, I decided it was the best choice for me. It is highly accredited, and the admissions advisors are very helpful. I could stay home while doing online coursework and look after my small son, meanwhile getting a great education with CTU.

The past five years have been a rollercoaster ride, but I would not change a thing. All my trials and tribulations have brought me to where I am today and the person I have become. I passed all my classes and earned an online degree which first got me an online job. My life is wonderful and extremely fulfilling. I now have a rewarding job at a local doctor's office. I am working toward a Bachelor's in Health Care Management and getting great grades. My husband and I own our own home now and have our privacy back. We are so happy to finally have financial freedom! I am so proud of myself and so are my friends and family. I would not have had it any other way.
Five years ago, my husband, child, and I were living with my parents.

Since my husband was the only one in our little family bringing in money, I decided I had to better myself and eventually get a job, but I knew I also needed to be home with our little son. I would enroll for classes at CTU online. It would give me the opportunity that a traditional college did not, to learn and, at the same time, to be at home for my family. I was worried at first that I would not be able to get back into a school mentality. Other things that worried me were that I am not smart enough, that I would suffer from another stroke, and that I might lose the support of my extended family.

I knew, for my vision to become a reality, I needed to first finish my degree, to get a decent-paying job, and to move our little family out of my parents house. To accomplish this, I realized I would have to work diligently. In order not to worry about child care when I got a job, I would somehow work from home until my son went to school full time. My husband's check would pay all the bills, so I would save up my money for a house and to pursue a Bachelor's degree. I would need to make sure only necessary money is spent for our everyday needs and then save the rest.

Now that I am taking courses, I'm excited to be getting great grades. The people in my support system play an important part in my getting tasks done on time and in my setting aside time to study. My husband, who is my rock, watches Matthew while I attend the live chats and finish up assignments. Robin, Matthew's godmother, takes him now and then for a night, so I have time to myself to unwind. My mom plays with Matthew during the daytime, so I am able to take much-needed naps. My family and friends support me by watching my son while I study or when I have to finish an important assignment. Some of them worry that I will get stressed out or that I won't have enough time for my family. I know I am okay and, with their love and support, can handle all my responsibilities with no problem. If I did not have family and friends to help, I know I could not achieve my goals.

It is necessary to plan ahead for any technical issue that may come up while pursuing my degree online. The problems that I foresee are: my son getting hold of my computer, my computer crashing from contracting a virus, and losing an important document. In order to combat these issues, I will always put my computer out of my son's reach, I will make sure my computer is equipped with the latest virus software, and I will always back up my assignments on disk or send documents in an e-mail to myself.

The goal that I worry about the most is finishing my Associate's. My family and friends will all pitch in with anything I need, from watching my child to critiquing a paper. I plan to make time for my family and friends by calling them on nights when I cannot get out and making sure I set aside a couple of times a month to go visiting. At home I am always up early, so I can complete all household chores, and save my family from having to do my chores while I attend school. I plan to look at my plan every couple of months to make sure I am following it and staying on track. I don't want to lose sight of all the little, everyday details while tackling the most important tasks in my plan.

If I follow through with my plan, I will have a happy and fulfilling life. My family is all the support I need to achieve my goals; they have always stood by me through thick and thin. I want the satisfaction of finishing school and achieving all my goals. I will not quit. What drives me is my family being proud of me for finishing my degree and making my life more successful by getting a great job, moving out of my parents' house, and having the tuition money to get my Bachelor's degree, which, in turn, will get me an even better job.

I think she wants it to be all one paper it is suppose to flow from one paragraph to another... I will see what she says I may need more segway to my next paragraph

I think she wants it to be all one paper it is suppose to flow from one paragraph to another...I will see what she says i may need more segway to my next paragraph
A teaching moment -- segway is the two-wheeled thing people can ride on; segue is the word you really want.

Ahh I see lol

ahh i see lol
You've worked very hard. Go take a rest now.

You too I am going to go to sleep been up since 5 am goodnight and thank you again

you too i am going to go to sleep been up since 5 am goodnight and thank you again
Sleep well and stay in touch.

Hi, nitelight198073!

I'm sorry that I've not been around as promised. It's been due to some health reasons and the fact that I've been having to live at the homes of various friends because of issues with my home.

I can see that you and Wondergirl have already done some really great work together!

I'll review things and see if there's value in my adding my "two-cents" worth to what has already been accomplished here.

Thanks!

Hi, nitelight198073!

I'm sorry that I've not been around as promised. It's been due to some health reasons and the fact that I've been having to live at the homes of various friends because of issues with my home.

I can see that you and Wondergirl have already done some really great work together!

I'll review things and see if there's value in my adding my "two-cents" worth to what has already been accomplished here.

Thanks!I understand you know... take care of you first... and thank you again for your help

Please let us know how this works out for you, nitelight198073! I think that I'm finally getting things to be better for me here. Am getting help from a number of different sources.

Thanks!

artlady agrees: You the bomb!I love what you do!

Well, bless your heart and thank you, artlady!

Sorry guys all late and wrong I got an A I appreciate everything

Yyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy!!

Well, congratulations, nitelight198073! Great job!