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PINALUS
Dec 2, 2008, 08:55 PM
I need help in paraphrasing the following,

" with torn and bleeding hearts we smile, / and mouth with myriad sublteties."

gkaiser3
Dec 2, 2008, 11:00 PM
That while my heart is breaking, I put on a smile. While I want to say so many things, I simply do not.

gkaiser3
Dec 2, 2008, 11:01 PM
That while my heart is breaking, I put on a smile. While I want to say so many things, I say the simplest.

CliffordK
Nov 20, 2010, 06:36 PM
It is a wonderful phrase.

Let not your emotions bleed into your words as poorly chosen words can cause unintended pain.